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10/22/2019 c1 vcs123
nice story
plz continue
5/20/2019 c1 5plums
I despise amnesia stories.
5/18/2019 c1 1Kamagong
What the fuck is a squeel/squeal? If you mean SEQUEL, then it's spelled S-E-Q-U-E-L. The story shows some promise, but you need to spell check and grammar check it a lot.
12/4/2018 c1 thunder18
Great chapter Update soon
11/27/2018 c1 Bisaster
Meh I'd rather you focus on the other one, I'm not a big fan of this.
11/27/2018 c1 Magi Mari
i suggest you AVOID the never ending WBWL cliché of neglected Harry, spoiled brother (better yet why don't you make it a sister for a change that would've been adorable), sh*tty parents, manipulative Dumbledore, everyone worshipping Dumbledore and thinks he doesn't make mistakes.

Keep making the parents stand up to Dumbledore and his control, don't turn Dumbledore into another dumb control freak villain just make him a misguided idiot but means well.
11/23/2018 c1 tom123asdf
This is good, Please don't make it a Harry gets abused, neglected or forgotten fic, there's already enough of those.

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