4/8/2020 c1 Anon
You probably already have a review like this since this story was in 2018, however I really enjoyed this. The love scene was intimate and flowed beautifully. I loved Kurogane's reaction. with that said, I was kinda disappointed in the climaxing. I felt like it was a little weak compared to the rest of the sex. I felt drawn out of the scene with the line "All good things must to an eventually come to an end however". Maybe play around with the line. You could have Fai cry out during the climax and that could send Kurogane over the edge paired with Fai's body spasm. Overall it was good!