for The Stag and the Flower3/10 c10 Helene Nightfire
The conversation at the end of Ch 10 re diet ending with “Functional immortality, Nicholas Flamel mused, wasn't always what it was cracked up to be.” is hilarious. It is a much more entertaining echo of a real conversation I’ve been part of and I’m sure others are having every day as we learn more about growing old with functional bodies. I love that the Flamels are having the same conversations.
The conversation at the end of Ch 10 re diet ending with “Functional immortality, Nicholas Flamel mused, wasn't always what it was cracked up to be.” is hilarious. It is a much more entertaining echo of a real conversation I’ve been part of and I’m sure others are having every day as we learn more about growing old with functional bodies. I love that the Flamels are having the same conversations.
1/6 c18 Guest
Congratulations on becoming a parent, as well as being an excellent author. Many blessings to you and your family.
Congratulations on becoming a parent, as well as being an excellent author. Many blessings to you and your family.
11/30/2024 c18 pincho
This should be changed to just drama. It isn't romance, you have a cheater and her enablers.
I find it hard to believe that Hermione is still friends with them in the end.
This should be changed to just drama. It isn't romance, you have a cheater and her enablers.
I find it hard to believe that Hermione is still friends with them in the end.
10/18/2024 c17 G Fawkes
How did Fleur's uncle, A squib, send a patronus message? If the daughter cast it, it would be in her voice.
How did Fleur's uncle, A squib, send a patronus message? If the daughter cast it, it would be in her voice.
10/17/2024 c10 G Fawkes
(butchering my attempt at fake French... and humor)
"No, 'arry! It is you who I want, how you say? Ze soixante neuf? Ze licking? Like last night! Zat Beel, he nevair do zat, evair!"
(butchering my attempt at fake French... and humor)
"No, 'arry! It is you who I want, how you say? Ze soixante neuf? Ze licking? Like last night! Zat Beel, he nevair do zat, evair!"
10/17/2024 c9 G Fawkes
Ah! But if she DID have back hair, she could braid into a rope, and harness a sea turtle to ride!
Ah! But if she DID have back hair, she could braid into a rope, and harness a sea turtle to ride!
10/16/2024 c2 G Fawkes
"... was worth risking the Statue."
Oh, yes, definitely watch out for the statue. Especially on a flying motorcycle.
STATUTE! (lol)
"... was worth risking the Statue."
Oh, yes, definitely watch out for the statue. Especially on a flying motorcycle.
STATUTE! (lol)
10/16/2024 c1 G Fawkes
Oh, yes, I can see it now. "Fleur, when I said 'sit anywhere you like' , I really hadn't meant for you to sit on my face! Oh well. When in Rome"
"We're in Paris, Harry... And don't talk with your mouth full."
Oh, yes, I can see it now. "Fleur, when I said 'sit anywhere you like' , I really hadn't meant for you to sit on my face! Oh well. When in Rome"
"We're in Paris, Harry... And don't talk with your mouth full."
10/14/2024 c18 A Sequal
This story needs a follow up! I don't know if you're plan to write one.
This story needs a follow up! I don't know if you're plan to write one.
7/13/2024 c9 
2cloverskye
... somehow i doubt troll skin i more deadly than basilisk venom, so why not use Phoenix tears. Unless The difference between a poison and venom would make that ineffective...
2cloverskye... somehow i doubt troll skin i more deadly than basilisk venom, so why not use Phoenix tears. Unless The difference between a poison and venom would make that ineffective...
7/10/2024 c6 cloverskye
Ahah! It may have taken me six chapters, but I've figured out who the older couple are. The Alma matre line really just confirmed it for me. Very cute idea!
Ahah! It may have taken me six chapters, but I've figured out who the older couple are. The Alma matre line really just confirmed it for me. Very cute idea!
7/8/2024 c18 Vycrius
‘“This was a wonderful idea,” Fleur said as she sipped her wine.’ She’s pregnant. She can’t drink wine. That’s the only issue I have with the story, otherwise great work.
‘“This was a wonderful idea,” Fleur said as she sipped her wine.’ She’s pregnant. She can’t drink wine. That’s the only issue I have with the story, otherwise great work.