
8/31/2021 c12 Pam11
To be your first story it was really good. I hope you decide to write more. Thank you
To be your first story it was really good. I hope you decide to write more. Thank you
8/22/2020 c12 Vadercat
Well done! It was original, kept with the character's personalities and it had a believable plot of your own making. Just one spelling error: tread (as to walk on something) vs. trade (which is to exchange goods). Keep up the good work!
Well done! It was original, kept with the character's personalities and it had a believable plot of your own making. Just one spelling error: tread (as to walk on something) vs. trade (which is to exchange goods). Keep up the good work!
12/17/2019 c12 Maria
Good story , you should do some more...
Good story , you should do some more...
8/16/2019 c12 Maria
Really really good story...
Really really good story...
2/14/2019 c12 lin s
callen needs to trust sam and team mates and hetty
callen needs to trust sam and team mates and hetty
2/13/2019 c12 Maria
Very good story...
Very good story...
1/17/2019 c12 Yena167
Wonderful.I am realy happy they are ok and trust each other again.
Now looking forward next new story :)
Wonderful.I am realy happy they are ok and trust each other again.
Now looking forward next new story :)
1/17/2019 c12
11countrygirluk56
I like the way Sam was so honest about how he felt which finally got through to our boy. A fitting ending to a wonderful story.

I like the way Sam was so honest about how he felt which finally got through to our boy. A fitting ending to a wonderful story.
1/17/2019 c12 Guest
French fan
Fantastic job for a first story
French fan
Fantastic job for a first story
1/17/2019 c11 countrygirluk56
Nice one. Sam finally figuring out where Callen was (even if he didn't think he'd be there) and finding in such distress, not all from his injuries. I hope Sam's plan to get through to Callen doesn't backfire with him getting more ill but taking him to hospital wouldn't go down well either. Can't wait for more.
Nice one. Sam finally figuring out where Callen was (even if he didn't think he'd be there) and finding in such distress, not all from his injuries. I hope Sam's plan to get through to Callen doesn't backfire with him getting more ill but taking him to hospital wouldn't go down well either. Can't wait for more.
1/16/2019 c11 ILust4Gage
Loving it! Sam should be ashamed for treating my boo so badly! Keep it coming. I am in deep!
Loving it! Sam should be ashamed for treating my boo so badly! Keep it coming. I am in deep!