for Certain Dark Things1/20/2019 c27 Ventari SylverFox
Poor girl. I wish her the best of luck trying to clean that house up during her breaks. Haha.
So glad to hear from you again, I was starting to worry. Excellent Job as always!
Poor girl. I wish her the best of luck trying to clean that house up during her breaks. Haha.
So glad to hear from you again, I was starting to worry. Excellent Job as always!
1/18/2019 c27 BIGEN Rockstar
okay, so is there a thing about magical potraits being to expensive, or people just don't care for them?
okay, so is there a thing about magical potraits being to expensive, or people just don't care for them?
1/8/2019 c23 an happy reader
I didn't want to make an other reviews because my eyes are actually hurting (because it's late and i should be sleeping), but Elara love declaration deserved a review (even if it's kind of an empty one ).
The birth of the Silver Trio, i'm really really an happy reader !
I didn't want to make an other reviews because my eyes are actually hurting (because it's late and i should be sleeping), but Elara love declaration deserved a review (even if it's kind of an empty one ).
The birth of the Silver Trio, i'm really really an happy reader !
1/8/2019 c22 an happy reader
I'll be honest, i didn't quite appreciate the beginning of this chapter. It always feel like bad fillers when author describe the exact same scene changing only the point of view.
But the end, the strange collaboration between Tom and Dumbledore, and Snape being so openly on Tom side, those were nice little nuggets. I guess the read would have been more "entertaining" (it's not the right word, but i'm not finding a better translation, and it's late so i'm kind of to tired to look for something better, sorry ) if we had Sev feeling about the situation as he walked with Tom to the third level and then maybe more information on how the collaboration came to be.
It's interesting to see that they don't know who is hosting Voldy, and as Tom is collaborating, feels like maybe their ambition is to definitively get ride of Voldy spirit which would change even more the original event as for example there would not be a resurection in 4th year, it wouldn't be necessary. I'm really intrigued by all that.
Hope the review makes sense, it's getting really late and there are probably a lot of mistakes, which never help to be understood. Sorry.
I'll be honest, i didn't quite appreciate the beginning of this chapter. It always feel like bad fillers when author describe the exact same scene changing only the point of view.
But the end, the strange collaboration between Tom and Dumbledore, and Snape being so openly on Tom side, those were nice little nuggets. I guess the read would have been more "entertaining" (it's not the right word, but i'm not finding a better translation, and it's late so i'm kind of to tired to look for something better, sorry ) if we had Sev feeling about the situation as he walked with Tom to the third level and then maybe more information on how the collaboration came to be.
It's interesting to see that they don't know who is hosting Voldy, and as Tom is collaborating, feels like maybe their ambition is to definitively get ride of Voldy spirit which would change even more the original event as for example there would not be a resurection in 4th year, it wouldn't be necessary. I'm really intrigued by all that.
Hope the review makes sense, it's getting really late and there are probably a lot of mistakes, which never help to be understood. Sorry.
1/8/2019 c21 an happy reader
I do love a crazy Dumbledore
Surprise by the lying side of Neville, i guess he is a little bit full of himself.
Well, seems like a troll adventure is always the good recipe for the formation of a Golden (Well Silver in this story I guess ) Trio. Drago is such a "con" (sorry don't have the correct english term for that ). If it wasn't for the fact that you've already announce the futur Dramione, i could have enjoyed hating him more (now i'm just intrigue : how are you gonna make that little monster evolve?).
And a third Voldy? Isn't Tom aware of the presence of the Stone? Are they all going to try and stole it?
Only 5 chapters left, I hope you'll update soon. For now, i'll enjoyed the reading i have left
I do love a crazy Dumbledore
Surprise by the lying side of Neville, i guess he is a little bit full of himself.
Well, seems like a troll adventure is always the good recipe for the formation of a Golden (Well Silver in this story I guess ) Trio. Drago is such a "con" (sorry don't have the correct english term for that ). If it wasn't for the fact that you've already announce the futur Dramione, i could have enjoyed hating him more (now i'm just intrigue : how are you gonna make that little monster evolve?).
And a third Voldy? Isn't Tom aware of the presence of the Stone? Are they all going to try and stole it?
Only 5 chapters left, I hope you'll update soon. For now, i'll enjoyed the reading i have left
1/8/2019 c16 an happy reader
What an interesting twist ! So there is a multitude of Voldy running around. Seems like they are not on the same side too, that sure is going to be an interesting source of plots twists.
What an interesting twist ! So there is a multitude of Voldy running around. Seems like they are not on the same side too, that sure is going to be an interesting source of plots twists.
1/8/2019 c15 an happy reader
Well that's an intriguing DADA teacher. How soon are you going to give us some background on him ? The Professors Tom title of the chapter make me believe that he as something to do with Voldy, but as he is a teacher in Poudlard it seems obvious that he doesn't have Riddle apparence or Dumbledore or Snape would have recognize him, no?
Then again, Harriet scar reaction to him, confirm that he has a link to Voldy (and him apparently understanding when she spoke in Parsel with Livi).
The History of Magic teacher change is interesting too. Those lesson are going to be interesting spot to have more infos on the magic world organisation and how the Pureblood came to power espite the apparent demise of Voldy.
Well that's an intriguing DADA teacher. How soon are you going to give us some background on him ? The Professors Tom title of the chapter make me believe that he as something to do with Voldy, but as he is a teacher in Poudlard it seems obvious that he doesn't have Riddle apparence or Dumbledore or Snape would have recognize him, no?
Then again, Harriet scar reaction to him, confirm that he has a link to Voldy (and him apparently understanding when she spoke in Parsel with Livi).
The History of Magic teacher change is interesting too. Those lesson are going to be interesting spot to have more infos on the magic world organisation and how the Pureblood came to power espite the apparent demise of Voldy.
1/8/2019 c12 an happy reader
Well thaht not how i imagine the first encounter of the three girls would go. But now i'm intrigued, because for no reason i just thought the girls would all end up in Slytherin (was it in the first AN, in the first chapter? I can't remember -_-'), so Hermione reflexion really surprise me.
I feel like i'm going to really like Elara and Hermione friendship (here again i'm just assuming the 3 are going to be your story Golden Trio) like Harriet is going to be the neutral one and the other two will be like two opposite extreme.
Well, enough suspens, next chapter here i come !
PS : If the relationship have so very little importance for the plots of the story, maybe you could not give the info, to not discouraged readers that are not into SSHP or big gap in relationship. Just an advice, hope it doesn't "sound" rude '
Well thaht not how i imagine the first encounter of the three girls would go. But now i'm intrigued, because for no reason i just thought the girls would all end up in Slytherin (was it in the first AN, in the first chapter? I can't remember -_-'), so Hermione reflexion really surprise me.
I feel like i'm going to really like Elara and Hermione friendship (here again i'm just assuming the 3 are going to be your story Golden Trio) like Harriet is going to be the neutral one and the other two will be like two opposite extreme.
Well, enough suspens, next chapter here i come !
PS : If the relationship have so very little importance for the plots of the story, maybe you could not give the info, to not discouraged readers that are not into SSHP or big gap in relationship. Just an advice, hope it doesn't "sound" rude '
1/8/2019 c11 happy reader
I love your story ! I don't know why it doesn't have much reviews because i think it'll deserve it !
I wanted to put reviews sooner but i didn't feel like stopping my reading before, this AN was the perfect moment. This far, i like the three characters that you have introduce and i love all clever Elara and Harriet seems to be (Hermione too, but it's not really a secret). Really like the introduction of the magical world throught those two pov. I love Set, even thought i'm not to sure what he actually is and i already know i'm going to love Snooty snake.
I'm curious to see the first scene when the three girls are going to be together for the first time.
Only "bad" thing I have to say is that I'm kinda disappointed that you announced the pairing at the beginning because i feel that it could stop people from reading further.
Sorry if my review is not really that constructive but it easier to read in english, than to express one's opinion (and sorry for the mistakes as you probably understood i'm not an english speaker).
Thank for sharing the story and now i'm going to read the 15 next chapters
I love your story ! I don't know why it doesn't have much reviews because i think it'll deserve it !
I wanted to put reviews sooner but i didn't feel like stopping my reading before, this AN was the perfect moment. This far, i like the three characters that you have introduce and i love all clever Elara and Harriet seems to be (Hermione too, but it's not really a secret). Really like the introduction of the magical world throught those two pov. I love Set, even thought i'm not to sure what he actually is and i already know i'm going to love Snooty snake.
I'm curious to see the first scene when the three girls are going to be together for the first time.
Only "bad" thing I have to say is that I'm kinda disappointed that you announced the pairing at the beginning because i feel that it could stop people from reading further.
Sorry if my review is not really that constructive but it easier to read in english, than to express one's opinion (and sorry for the mistakes as you probably understood i'm not an english speaker).
Thank for sharing the story and now i'm going to read the 15 next chapters
1/7/2019 c26 Ventari SylverFox
That book of Slytherin’s is driving me crazy.
Great work updating even over the holiday! I just now got a chance to read and catch up. Can’t wait for more though!
That book of Slytherin’s is driving me crazy.
Great work updating even over the holiday! I just now got a chance to read and catch up. Can’t wait for more though!
1/2/2019 c26 ImagineStories
This story is just so intriguing. I am always drawn back whenever it is updated.
This story is just so intriguing. I am always drawn back whenever it is updated.
1/1/2019 c6 
1hiareportsyou
I love your writing but honestly you need to stock to one or two POVs ots the 6th chapter and where on the 4th pov. This story is about Harriet. Not hermione
Not your OC. Harry. In fanfiction stories that use more than 1-2 povs very rarely are good because of progression and us not giving a shit about what are essentially npcs.
1hiareportsyouI love your writing but honestly you need to stock to one or two POVs ots the 6th chapter and where on the 4th pov. This story is about Harriet. Not hermione
Not your OC. Harry. In fanfiction stories that use more than 1-2 povs very rarely are good because of progression and us not giving a shit about what are essentially npcs.
1/1/2019 c26 6annavale23
I love your descriptions of Slytherin! He sort of oozes creepiness off the page!
6annavale23I love your descriptions of Slytherin! He sort of oozes creepiness off the page!