
12/14/2018 c18
6annavale23
Yes, I think it's better that Harriet doesn't get 1st year Quidditch. Nice chapter!

Yes, I think it's better that Harriet doesn't get 1st year Quidditch. Nice chapter!
12/14/2018 c18 Ventari SylverFox
While slightly disappointed that Harriet didn’t make the team, it is more believable that she didn’t. I hope she will attempt in the following years and am anxious to see what position she will play.
Very good as always!
While slightly disappointed that Harriet didn’t make the team, it is more believable that she didn’t. I hope she will attempt in the following years and am anxious to see what position she will play.
Very good as always!
12/13/2018 c17 Ventari SylverFox
I had wondered if she would see the thestrals. I quite like them myself.
Great as always!
I had wondered if she would see the thestrals. I quite like them myself.
Great as always!
12/12/2018 c16 annavale23
I loved Severus' lesson! He's so fun to read. I enjoyed the last bit too. Very interesting.
I loved Severus' lesson! He's so fun to read. I enjoyed the last bit too. Very interesting.
12/12/2018 c16 Ventari SylverFox
Oh how I look forward to your updates. You’ve peaked my interest with the divisions of the Dark Lord. Do they know what happened, that they are all part of the same whole, if that is what it even is?
Also, I just reread some of my reviews. I apologize for coming off a bit of a moron. Typing on my phone is always more easily said that done, and since I cannot see the full screen, I often miss mistakes.
Either way, you are amazing as always, and I eagerly await more!
Oh how I look forward to your updates. You’ve peaked my interest with the divisions of the Dark Lord. Do they know what happened, that they are all part of the same whole, if that is what it even is?
Also, I just reread some of my reviews. I apologize for coming off a bit of a moron. Typing on my phone is always more easily said that done, and since I cannot see the full screen, I often miss mistakes.
Either way, you are amazing as always, and I eagerly await more!
12/11/2018 c15 ted
I love this. I also like that you update everyday
I love this. I also like that you update everyday
12/11/2018 c15 Why881992883840002882818839
Such interesting changes from canon, it has me very curious! The changes are also conservative enough that I’m not left wondering why you didn’t just write original fiction so that’s good too. I hope to see more, thanks for the story.
Such interesting changes from canon, it has me very curious! The changes are also conservative enough that I’m not left wondering why you didn’t just write original fiction so that’s good too. I hope to see more, thanks for the story.
12/11/2018 c15 Ventari SylverFox
Professor Slytherin. I quite liked that confrontation. And poor Livi. Hehe.
Excellent as always!
Professor Slytherin. I quite liked that confrontation. And poor Livi. Hehe.
Excellent as always!
12/10/2018 c14 Ignis
Loving it... Tho I hope you haven't abandoned your other fanfiction, too?
Loving it... Tho I hope you haven't abandoned your other fanfiction, too?
12/10/2018 c14 annavale23
I'm really enjoying the whole hierarchy system you've set up here. Great chapter!
I'm really enjoying the whole hierarchy system you've set up here. Great chapter!
12/10/2018 c14 Ventari SylverFox
Elara killed her plant just by touching it! And I love how snarky Harriet is, can’t wait for more.
But I adore most is when I think I’ve figured you out, you hand me a new crumb that blows my conclusions out of the water (which is something not any people can do).
Keep it up!
Elara killed her plant just by touching it! And I love how snarky Harriet is, can’t wait for more.
But I adore most is when I think I’ve figured you out, you hand me a new crumb that blows my conclusions out of the water (which is something not any people can do).
Keep it up!