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12/22/2018 c8 1WonderOverSonder
I would just like to say that I am absolutely loving this story. We get no real interaction between Freckle and Viktor in the comics, save that one glare. Seeing what it would be like for them to interact at length and even come to an understanding of sorts is nice. I feel like maybe Tracy is going to have them interact at length at some point, and that's why they haven't interacted in even the side comics? So it's nice to see it somewhere. The writing is also done rather well. I mean, I'm terrible at constructive criticism, but I didn't really notice any stick out problems with spelling or grammar. Length is nice too, long enough to satisfy the reader without dragging on for way too long; something I feel like I have a problem with myself. Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more!

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