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10/30 c5 loligang
I hope morpho knight gets his time to shine
9/9 c5 Guest
Just going to say, wow. This fic has been going for a while, and it’s incredibly long too. I love the amount of love each character gets, and it’s deserving as well. Thank you so much for creating this fic, and I’ll see you when you post your next chapter!
4/9 c5 ReDestrobo
Wow v3 characters...I truly miss those guys.

Thank you for that little scene it truly was beautiful.
4/5 c5 14FireFlamerx9z
Great chapter! I loved the added Halberd but as someone who hangs around Tv Tropes, the correct term for Susie going from evil to good is Heel-Face Turn. Face Heel Turn is the other way.
10/7/2019 c4 ArchbowMistress
Woooooo whoooooo even if its not even finished, I enjoy rereading everything and just soaking up the little details. Every word feels just as (bitter)sweet as the first time I read it, there is no doubt that your writting is phenominal! Keep writting and rest if you want! I would gladly wait for quality such as this (and the other stories that I absolutely adore).
7/21/2019 c4 2TopazstarV
I love it when the characters are fleshed out like this. It makes them all feel so much more alive.
6/30/2019 c4 Anon Omega
Persona 5. (Last Surprise intensifies.)
6/22/2019 c3 Sylas
I think the interpretation of Parallel Dedede's boss description is that he was formed when the heart flew out of Dedede's body, back to the altar. But yeah, it could have been worded better.
6/22/2019 c4 Sylas
You're writing style reminds me of Ian Flynn's. Which is good. I like that.
6/21/2019 c4 Pusheen reads
Yeeeee!
I’ve been waiting for an update and it actually happened! I love the amount of effort you put into this story and the different character view points that you write, it just gives the story so much depth. I also love the character interactions that you wrote for this chapter, and the different teams you introduced and made this time around!
~ can’t wait for the next chapter for this and your other Kirby stories!
6/21/2019 c4 Pusheen reads
Yeeeee!
You finally posted a new chapter this brightened my day a whole lot since today’s the last day of school, I loved the way you described the characters points of view and how this chapter was really heart warming as well as a few to the team ups you wrote into this chapter! ;) 3
6/21/2019 c4 6GlowingGem
Gooey. The ultimate fourth wall breaker. Hades, from Kid Icuras uprising, has got nothing on you!
Anyway... This chapter was certainly worth the wait! And boy! Was it a long one, but I'm not complaining! There's some really good chemistry going on here with the star Allies. Everyone is starting to get comfortable with eachother (for the most part)
The battle with Kracko was awesome! I really wasn't expecting it to be the real him, that was a suprise. (He just hates everyone doesn't he?) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
And... A stock Mecha Knight with a massage feature? I'd buy it!
6/21/2019 c4 39OwlsCantRead
Goddamn and I thought me writing 25K for a single chapter was horrendous enough lol. Heh, you are passionate! I'm pleasantly surprised though — I got burned out while writing a similiar amount, so do take care! Wouldn't want overambition and stress to get you while writing Dimension III, and considering that you clearly have a lot of love for the Wave 2 friends, that'll probably be something.

The opening with Zan is really haunting. It really extrapolates the dire situation she feels and only hits home when she is reunited with them in the nick of time. And yeah, I know it's juxtaposed by the very end, but lemme dream.

Oh. The mid-air door puzzle. I seriously almost forgot about how much agony it caused me, which sucks even more because I distinctively remember thinking a flying rock Rick-Geokinesis trick was the solution for a literal eternity before cheesing it the exact same way you did. I still bear a grudge with the RCK puzzle, wouldn't have spent 6,000 words berating it otherwise.

Gosh, Gooey's first-person dialogue. He comes off as very childish and it almost seems like his literal and through-train manner of thought and speech could be ripped out of a young kids' book. Needless to say, I'm mighty impressed by the feat. The Helpers and their antics were also hilariously vitriolic, and a Friend Train with fifteen others following sounds like an epic rollercoaster disaster waiting to happen and I'm glad it is indeed for the more stoic half of the crew.

Parallel Kracko is a fun fight to read, and the Fighters Deluxe pause reference is really smart because I recognized it instantly! Although ironically, I think the Star Allies actually seemed to have more trouble with Parallel Twin Kracko rather than Parallel Big Kracko, but I suppose a mix of crazy-depraved Krackoa whooping 16 allies instead of 4 might have something to do with that.

Anyway, this chapter really made my terribly long day, and I really love the overall fluff and unexpected interactions between everyone when the situation (outlandish or serious) calls for it. It's truly a standout story. :)
6/20/2019 c1 14Creative CutiePrincess D
hey, this is a really good fanfic I thought I was the only one who thought to retell the kirby series. I like what you did here, I haven't read the whole thing yet but so far so good. I'll check out the of your stories too.
6/20/2019 c4 3KirbyPwnz1234
I'm literally speechless at this point; you might've gone over nearly 30,000 words or something! I have a lot to say and it might take forever to write it so I'll keep it simple.

From the start to the end, everything made me feel emotions of all kinds and about each character as well! Now I'm starting to look at the Kirby world in a whole different perspective than before, you went real deep on this one. No wonder it's so long, but it was worth it! I really need to change my approach on my writing for sure while I'm at it.

Also, the references really got me, especially the V3 ones. Oh btw, you should check out this fangame called Super Danganronpa Another 2 if you haven't heard of it. Trust me, you'll definitely enjoy it!

I could go on forever, but I'll just leave it at that for the time being and say this chapter was pure genius and beautiful. Don't overwork yourself as well and take care!
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