for Empire of Zero5/2/2019 c3 
2KirovAirshipMixOptimal
This reminds me of how will these friends of us will fare when they are going to fight over there in Albion with lots of mages after their asses.
My personal bets are a) give their army rifled caplock musket (250m of effective range, probably outrange everyone except artillery) or b) attach a commissar to every units (the commissar will execute those they deem as cowards and encourage others to fight even harder against all odds)
2KirovAirshipMixOptimalThis reminds me of how will these friends of us will fare when they are going to fight over there in Albion with lots of mages after their asses.
My personal bets are a) give their army rifled caplock musket (250m of effective range, probably outrange everyone except artillery) or b) attach a commissar to every units (the commissar will execute those they deem as cowards and encourage others to fight even harder against all odds)
3/8/2019 c2 KirovAirshipMixOptimal
Kneeling is a sign of servitude; behavior of a slave, not free men. As such I abhor and despise any kind of groveling and kneeling; a deep bow would have been sufficed, for we do not even kneel in the presence of modern Earth royalties.
But I like the story nonetheless. Keep it up comrade.
Kneeling is a sign of servitude; behavior of a slave, not free men. As such I abhor and despise any kind of groveling and kneeling; a deep bow would have been sufficed, for we do not even kneel in the presence of modern Earth royalties.
But I like the story nonetheless. Keep it up comrade.
3/6/2019 c2 PERORONCINO
Pls tell me that Saito and the other Generals have special abilities since their are bound by the familiar contract .. and Please update the next chapter as soon as possible
Pls tell me that Saito and the other Generals have special abilities since their are bound by the familiar contract .. and Please update the next chapter as soon as possible
3/6/2019 c1 Guest
this format is awful man dont make it a text wall
this format is awful man dont make it a text wall
12/12/2018 c1 Vercingetorix Rex
no offense but the format is just awful to read, you should create paragraphs to give more clarity / visibility to your story, because I really had trouble reading.
no oc replacement ?! cool I strongly dislike fics substitutions of one charactere by another!
example Naruto x Familiar Of Zero, Naruto is summoned by Louise and of course Naruto x Saito harem! :s
If Louise is destined to become the future Empress of Tristain, I hope that Saito will be the future Emperor.
and for pairings, is it only Saito x Louise or Saito x harem later?
Rome Total War, I am a fan of history and for having played I really hated the game! to see Carthage the Greatest Rival of Rome losing its capital in 2-3 rounds against Scipii always shocked me and left a bitter taste lol OxO
My God! what is this massacre!
Rome II raises a little level but Creative Assembly could have done much better!
example: the number of cities , only two in Sicily? only Athens and Sparta as city-states in Greece? OO
no offense but the format is just awful to read, you should create paragraphs to give more clarity / visibility to your story, because I really had trouble reading.
no oc replacement ?! cool I strongly dislike fics substitutions of one charactere by another!
example Naruto x Familiar Of Zero, Naruto is summoned by Louise and of course Naruto x Saito harem! :s
If Louise is destined to become the future Empress of Tristain, I hope that Saito will be the future Emperor.
and for pairings, is it only Saito x Louise or Saito x harem later?
Rome Total War, I am a fan of history and for having played I really hated the game! to see Carthage the Greatest Rival of Rome losing its capital in 2-3 rounds against Scipii always shocked me and left a bitter taste lol OxO
My God! what is this massacre!
Rome II raises a little level but Creative Assembly could have done much better!
example: the number of cities , only two in Sicily? only Athens and Sparta as city-states in Greece? OO
12/6/2018 c1 Guest
The formatting of this story makes it really hard to read. Ther should be a free line after each paragraph to improve readability.
The formatting of this story makes it really hard to read. Ther should be a free line after each paragraph to improve readability.
12/4/2018 c1 TDL
I like so far
I like so far