for Fifty shades of grey daddys little girl5/10 c1 ChloeBenjamin
Hello Stargirl2018!
I just finished reading your story on fanfiction and wow it really stuck with me. The way you built the characters and layered the emotions was seriously impressive. It got me thinking: this could make an amazing comic.
I’m Chloe Benjamin, a freelance illustrator who specializes in comics and character design. I’ve been doing this for a few years now and I absolutely love bringing stories like yours to life visually.
If you're ever open to the idea of adapting your story into a comic, I’d love to collaborate and see what we can create together. No pressure at all just thought I’d reach out because your work really inspired me.
You can check out some of my past projects on Instagram: chloe_benjamin999
And if you feel like chatting, I’m on Discord (chloe_benjamin999) or email (chloebenjamin999 ).
Hope to hear from you and either way, keep writing. You’ve got something special.
All the best,
Chloe
Hello Stargirl2018!
I just finished reading your story on fanfiction and wow it really stuck with me. The way you built the characters and layered the emotions was seriously impressive. It got me thinking: this could make an amazing comic.
I’m Chloe Benjamin, a freelance illustrator who specializes in comics and character design. I’ve been doing this for a few years now and I absolutely love bringing stories like yours to life visually.
If you're ever open to the idea of adapting your story into a comic, I’d love to collaborate and see what we can create together. No pressure at all just thought I’d reach out because your work really inspired me.
You can check out some of my past projects on Instagram: chloe_benjamin999
And if you feel like chatting, I’m on Discord (chloe_benjamin999) or email (chloebenjamin999 ).
Hope to hear from you and either way, keep writing. You’ve got something special.
All the best,
Chloe
4/29 c1 mireille011
Hi amazing writer, I'm Mireille Parsons came here to greeting you.
Just finished reading your story really impressive work. Your pacing, character depth, and emotional beats are incredibly well crafted and kept me engaged throughout.
It’s clear you have a strong voice and a great sense of narrative flow.
I’m a comic and character artist, and your writing instantly sparked visual ideas.
I’d love to see your work adapted visually someday. Feel free to connect on Discord if that interests you:[ mireille999.]/
Hi amazing writer, I'm Mireille Parsons came here to greeting you.
Just finished reading your story really impressive work. Your pacing, character depth, and emotional beats are incredibly well crafted and kept me engaged throughout.
It’s clear you have a strong voice and a great sense of narrative flow.
I’m a comic and character artist, and your writing instantly sparked visual ideas.
I’d love to see your work adapted visually someday. Feel free to connect on Discord if that interests you:[ mireille999.]/
5/28/2024 c68 joan.goldman.9
Thank goodness it wasn’t a trap for kidnapping Sophia again. Sarah actually wanted Sophia to talk on her behalf at h er parole hearing. What a joke. Have to be proud of her and how she handled Sarah. Christian is going to be stopping Sarah from getting paroled?
I’m thrilled you came back and are going to complete the story. Be well.
Thank goodness it wasn’t a trap for kidnapping Sophia again. Sarah actually wanted Sophia to talk on her behalf at h er parole hearing. What a joke. Have to be proud of her and how she handled Sarah. Christian is going to be stopping Sarah from getting paroled?
I’m thrilled you came back and are going to complete the story. Be well.
5/28/2024 c67 joan.goldman.9
OMG Sarah write to Sophia and asked her to come visit her in prison! How did Sarah get the note to Caleb to give to Sophia? Something is fishy?
OMG Sarah write to Sophia and asked her to come visit her in prison! How did Sarah get the note to Caleb to give to Sophia? Something is fishy?
5/28/2024 c66 joan.goldman.9
Have to love all the little things that Sophia pulled on her parents so far. Ha
Have to love all the little things that Sophia pulled on her parents so far. Ha
5/28/2024 c65 joan.goldman.9
Every time I hear about how Sarah treated Sophia I want to slap that woman! Will Sophia tell her parents that she wants to confront the witch?
Every time I hear about how Sarah treated Sophia I want to slap that woman! Will Sophia tell her parents that she wants to confront the witch?
5/28/2024 c68 LiannyW
Thanks for continuing this story. If I were Christian, I would be worried about the contact at school that was able to pass on the letter. That means the Mom has a way to get to Sophia. Also can't wait to see Christian's reaction when he views the video from the visit. Sophia did well fight back her Mum. Thanks for the update.
Thanks for continuing this story. If I were Christian, I would be worried about the contact at school that was able to pass on the letter. That means the Mom has a way to get to Sophia. Also can't wait to see Christian's reaction when he views the video from the visit. Sophia did well fight back her Mum. Thanks for the update.
5/27/2024 c68 Carol222
Poor Sophia! Her plan to ditch Security went haywire. However, I am glad she had the opportunity to confront Sarah directly. Sarah ran true to form and only wanted Sophia to help her get a parole. Sarah went all the way in telling her daughter her true feelings about her in a cruel way. Sophia seems to be taking it well though. Flynn to the rescue. And the Grey's should ease up a little in the punishments.
Poor Sophia! Her plan to ditch Security went haywire. However, I am glad she had the opportunity to confront Sarah directly. Sarah ran true to form and only wanted Sophia to help her get a parole. Sarah went all the way in telling her daughter her true feelings about her in a cruel way. Sophia seems to be taking it well though. Flynn to the rescue. And the Grey's should ease up a little in the punishments.
1/28/2023 c67 shan36
I was wondering how long it would take for her to try and contact Sofia. I can’t wait to see how this plays out. Great chapter!
I was wondering how long it would take for her to try and contact Sofia. I can’t wait to see how this plays out. Great chapter!
1/22/2023 c67 TLynnson
I really want to like Sophie but her inability to communicate with her parents and default reaction to problems is lies makes her unattractive. Her lies continue to get her into trouble which makes no sense.
Don’t know if your intent is to make her a pathological liar but that’s the way I read her. It’s sad because she has an awesome family who love and support her but deserve better from her.
Sophie needs to grow up and use some of that therapy to actually talk to her parents when problems arise. Her actions don’t bode when for future relationships either friends or romantic. No one wants a chronic liar for a partner or friend!
I really want to like Sophie but her inability to communicate with her parents and default reaction to problems is lies makes her unattractive. Her lies continue to get her into trouble which makes no sense.
Don’t know if your intent is to make her a pathological liar but that’s the way I read her. It’s sad because she has an awesome family who love and support her but deserve better from her.
Sophie needs to grow up and use some of that therapy to actually talk to her parents when problems arise. Her actions don’t bode when for future relationships either friends or romantic. No one wants a chronic liar for a partner or friend!
1/21/2023 c67 Luvdisney2007
Yay, I love this story. I don’t think she should go visit. It’s understandable she wants answers but what she should be thinking is where the note came from. Who gave it to Caleb and could this just be a ploy for another kidnapping.
Yay, I love this story. I don’t think she should go visit. It’s understandable she wants answers but what she should be thinking is where the note came from. Who gave it to Caleb and could this just be a ploy for another kidnapping.
1/21/2023 c67 Carol222
Sophia, please, please show Sarah's letter to Christian. It won't go well if Sawyer pursues this, as he suspects something is not right.
Sophia, please, please show Sarah's letter to Christian. It won't go well if Sawyer pursues this, as he suspects something is not right.