for High School4/21/2003 c1 
3Kitty Mizu
Hey interesting story! This is actually my first time to read a RayxTyson fic even if it's for a while ^_^ Anyway, can't wait for the next chappie! Ganbatte ne!
3Kitty MizuHey interesting story! This is actually my first time to read a RayxTyson fic even if it's for a while ^_^ Anyway, can't wait for the next chappie! Ganbatte ne!
4/21/2003 c1 pinkdevil
cool so rays the same
cool so rays the same
4/21/2003 c1 12backward
hey this a really kewl fic ya gotta write more this is really good an i dont generally read beyblade fics =)
12backwardhey this a really kewl fic ya gotta write more this is really good an i dont generally read beyblade fics =)
4/21/2003 c1 9Nakoruru-1
Plz continue this story! I really like how things are shaping. Two people in love with Ty, that's the kind of triangles I like in my yaoi! It really is good work!
9Nakoruru-1Plz continue this story! I really like how things are shaping. Two people in love with Ty, that's the kind of triangles I like in my yaoi! It really is good work!
4/21/2003 c1 Little Leila
1. I´m sure you didn´t mean Kevin, you meant Kenny.
2. If you write Tyson´s shortened name then you should drop the H in Thy. Ty is more like it.
3. The name of Ray´s bitbeast is Drigger.
Don´t get this wrong, I don´t flame you. I just corrected a few things. ^_^ Sorry
But I think you ahould continue. The story is good so far. ^_~
1. I´m sure you didn´t mean Kevin, you meant Kenny.
2. If you write Tyson´s shortened name then you should drop the H in Thy. Ty is more like it.
3. The name of Ray´s bitbeast is Drigger.
Don´t get this wrong, I don´t flame you. I just corrected a few things. ^_^ Sorry
But I think you ahould continue. The story is good so far. ^_~
4/21/2003 c1 24asa-chan
Very interesting. A bit short but you can change that, ne? *hint*
Please continue and let this be a Kai/Tyson. I just love that pairing. Hope you'll update soon.
Keep writing!
Asa-chan
24asa-chanVery interesting. A bit short but you can change that, ne? *hint*
Please continue and let this be a Kai/Tyson. I just love that pairing. Hope you'll update soon.
Keep writing!
Asa-chan
4/21/2003 c1 19Lifelessmidget
hey dis is gud, please continue...i wouldn't mind knowing what happens next!
19Lifelessmidgethey dis is gud, please continue...i wouldn't mind knowing what happens next!