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7/16 c8 0SolarEclipse0
Baby Mika is the most precious thing in th world, I would die for him.
6/2 c1 e10620ac
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6/2 c1 e10620ac
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5/17 c22 3BloodStarGeneral
So yeah, this was an amazing read. I found your story late last night and ended up bringing through the whole thing. Might hurt me when I have to work in. A few hours, but I was just so deep into this story that I couldn't get out. Vivian is a character that I was getting very emotionally attached to and I just wanted to keep seeing her story unfold.

Either way, I hope the rewrite/updates are going well. I can see it's been a year since the last update, so I'm not sure how much you may still be interested in continuing this tory is, but I have this story added now and i will be patently awaiting a new update hopefully in the future.

Though if you are finished, but still end up reading this, I hope you are doing well and that your writing is still going strong.

I hope you have a great night, Ciao!
3/7 c22 Guest
It's been months already since I saw your rewrite on AO3 and while good, it doesn't seem much different from this one other than the name and heritage change. So please update this soon or at least give us some news on it we haven't heard from you in so long
11/22/2021 c8 1TheOldestJames
Holy shit guys i got past chapter 8! Chapter fucking 8!
5/29/2021 c22 1Mystic Moon Flower
Ohhhh... So this was a Crowley fic at first so that's why she was ogling him. xD I wouldn't mind a little extra to spice things up. xD
5/19/2021 c1 Chusii
I am just starting to fic and I wanted to ask wym by grey!oc? like grey haired or something? If its explained in the story, sorry for being impatient lol.
5/4/2021 c22 Carrie1696
I'm lowkey obsessed with this it’s so amazing! I think your writing was already fantastic all throughout this! The character interactions feel real and I especially loved her interactions with Mika and also the last chapters with Shinya‘s squad. So cuteee! Vivian feels like a real character with flaws! So glad I found this thank you for writing this! 3
5/1/2021 c22 e10620
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4/10/2021 c22 Alice Fairchild
I understand your decision. Growth as a writer is something that forces to recognise that your previous works are not to the standard that you can currently write.
However, I disagree that the story needs to be rewritten. For me, I've loved this fic since it#s very beginning. I can say, without any doubt, that I've never been bored with it. One of the great points of your work is the focus on the feelings of the characters and the way that you can make readers relate to them.
Anayways, if you wish to rewrite the story, you have my full support - not that it's worth much, mind you, but I felt that I needed to leave this review.
Looking forward to your future works.
3/21/2021 c22 6NguyetMieu
Don’t worry about what we think; as you’ve said this fic is self-indulgent so you do you (*︶*)
2/28/2021 c21 Luxo11
I’m loving this story so far. Keep it up!
2/22/2021 c19 Alice Fairchild
Well done. The interaction between Vivian and Crowley as well as her subtle rationalisation of her actions towards humans and the effect the vampire apathy on her personality is well portrayed and is becoming more and more apparent. I love how Vivian isn't those boring self-righteous MCs. Instead she feels more real and comes off as a normal person who became a vampire because she could not bear not seeing her friends again.
The meeting between Shinya and Vivian had great conflicting feelings and I could practically feel Vivian's worries about being accepted or not. Plus, the way they met was actually pretty realistic as even canon Shinya despite being very laid back would trust in his friend when necessary.
Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.
2/22/2021 c21 2Kimura Tsukino
*gasp* Senpai noticed me!
Praise Jashin for a new chapter has been revealed to the masses!
Personally I wasn’t too bothered by the abundance of dialogue. Also how did I know Shinya would donate his blood to a worthy cause? Probably reader’s intuition.
When she smiles I imagine there to be flowers and sparkles surrounding her for some reason...
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