for The Black Blade, Reforged6/6/2019 c1 Guest
Could you please update Reading the Future to Save the Past?
Could you please update Reading the Future to Save the Past?
12/26/2018 c1 
2lepidus
I'm really intrigued by this character. The whole gender identity issue/grandfather/brother/sister thing is a unique quality. I also like the way you write both internal and external dialogue.
The story itself seems promising. This "Kazuto" is much less stable and socially avoidant than canon, meaning interactions will be very odd to see. I'm excited for the talk between her and Asuna, since there's been little extensive dialogue between two characters as of yet.
I'll be checking in, good luck!
2lepidusI'm really intrigued by this character. The whole gender identity issue/grandfather/brother/sister thing is a unique quality. I also like the way you write both internal and external dialogue.
The story itself seems promising. This "Kazuto" is much less stable and socially avoidant than canon, meaning interactions will be very odd to see. I'm excited for the talk between her and Asuna, since there's been little extensive dialogue between two characters as of yet.
I'll be checking in, good luck!
12/26/2018 c1 YuukiAsuna-Chan
1st, put in your summary it is a .
2nd, why bother making Kirito a girl if you just gonna have her look male anyway? Seems kinda pointless.
1st, put in your summary it is a .
2nd, why bother making Kirito a girl if you just gonna have her look male anyway? Seems kinda pointless.
12/16/2018 c1 Vercingetorix Rex
female Kirito? no offense but I find it weird because I really can't imagine the idea of a female Kirito and I don't even speak of yuri yuck!
you lost a reader here, I would have preferred Kirito to remain male lol!
female Kirito? no offense but I find it weird because I really can't imagine the idea of a female Kirito and I don't even speak of yuri yuck!
you lost a reader here, I would have preferred Kirito to remain male lol!