for Phantoms for the Throne9/13 c59 Jema
Es una gran historia espero que continúes
Es una gran historia espero que continúes
8/13 c59 
7The PhantomHokage
I have to say am sorryto see you leaving FF but I can understand your reasons for doing these. I will be checking out your work on A03 mostly cause I found these story AMAZING. Everything about it was awesome there parts that felt very slow but same time I knew they had to be you can't rush some of thes work. I was continuntly reading everything page and word I couldn't take my eyes off it. It was amazingly written well I loved all the characters you put into it and how you did everything. Such as Sam's jealousy amazingly written well honestly at times I wanted to yell at her out of may characters Sam has some of the most flaws in my oppinon I mean first she tell Danny never to use his powers for want and gain unless it is for her want and gain. She is always telling him and Tucker how to do shit for someone always about people being indiviuals she seems that only means if they being the indiviuals she wants them to be. Most of the time its easy to see she does shit to gain attention and to piss off her parents which is being normal teenager also when you think about it she does play huge part in Danny becoming part ghost I mean what kinda friend talks their other friend into watching into device that would possible kill you like ghost portal. I mean seriously to create portal it has to rip hole in fabric of reality which would of actually deatomized Danny. You know how his parents talk about ripping ghost part molucule by molucule well that would have basically happen to Danny when you think about it. But yeah no Sam's jealous was done good hell their time I thought maybe Sam would have went over to Vlad side giving up Danny and the others if it meant getting him like she do these to Vlad 'Ok you want his mom well I want Danny you help me rid of Ember McLain and I'll help you get rid of Jack Fenton and we can both be happy.' like seriously I could almost see that. Also love the other characters like Timmy and his crew, Gwen, The U File people and more again just so amazingly written well I can't wait to see it on Ao3 it seems like you might have changed stuff so I'll re-read it and all their and your other stories.
7The PhantomHokageI have to say am sorryto see you leaving FF but I can understand your reasons for doing these. I will be checking out your work on A03 mostly cause I found these story AMAZING. Everything about it was awesome there parts that felt very slow but same time I knew they had to be you can't rush some of thes work. I was continuntly reading everything page and word I couldn't take my eyes off it. It was amazingly written well I loved all the characters you put into it and how you did everything. Such as Sam's jealousy amazingly written well honestly at times I wanted to yell at her out of may characters Sam has some of the most flaws in my oppinon I mean first she tell Danny never to use his powers for want and gain unless it is for her want and gain. She is always telling him and Tucker how to do shit for someone always about people being indiviuals she seems that only means if they being the indiviuals she wants them to be. Most of the time its easy to see she does shit to gain attention and to piss off her parents which is being normal teenager also when you think about it she does play huge part in Danny becoming part ghost I mean what kinda friend talks their other friend into watching into device that would possible kill you like ghost portal. I mean seriously to create portal it has to rip hole in fabric of reality which would of actually deatomized Danny. You know how his parents talk about ripping ghost part molucule by molucule well that would have basically happen to Danny when you think about it. But yeah no Sam's jealous was done good hell their time I thought maybe Sam would have went over to Vlad side giving up Danny and the others if it meant getting him like she do these to Vlad 'Ok you want his mom well I want Danny you help me rid of Ember McLain and I'll help you get rid of Jack Fenton and we can both be happy.' like seriously I could almost see that. Also love the other characters like Timmy and his crew, Gwen, The U File people and more again just so amazingly written well I can't wait to see it on Ao3 it seems like you might have changed stuff so I'll re-read it and all their and your other stories.
6/19 c1 Otaku-king-389
Ngl even after you pulled that childish tantrum and decided to post on ao3 instead of here, i still come here to reread this story, simply because it’s an amazing work of art and i always find myself drawn in and not able to stop reading it’s paced well, the plot is actually unique and well thought out, the lore is deeply planned out to the finest details, like if you actually finish this story in ao3 i will binge read the entire thing because i can tell you put so much hard work into your fictions that it plays out to me as though it’s an extension or a cannon au of the actual story itself, i may find your tantrum uncalled for but i shall continue to support yoy as a writer and gladly follow this stories hopeful path to completion
Ngl even after you pulled that childish tantrum and decided to post on ao3 instead of here, i still come here to reread this story, simply because it’s an amazing work of art and i always find myself drawn in and not able to stop reading it’s paced well, the plot is actually unique and well thought out, the lore is deeply planned out to the finest details, like if you actually finish this story in ao3 i will binge read the entire thing because i can tell you put so much hard work into your fictions that it plays out to me as though it’s an extension or a cannon au of the actual story itself, i may find your tantrum uncalled for but i shall continue to support yoy as a writer and gladly follow this stories hopeful path to completion
2/29 c59 Guest
Wow…ok..I always read this because I love these. But I guess it’s not enough. Oh well.
Wow…ok..I always read this because I love these. But I guess it’s not enough. Oh well.
4/7/2023 c59 marquis.shax
news flash my friend EVERY community is toxic if people don't like a pairing or something they're going to get on you about it it's not JUST Naruto I've seen it happen in Bleach, MHA, and One Piece
news flash my friend EVERY community is toxic if people don't like a pairing or something they're going to get on you about it it's not JUST Naruto I've seen it happen in Bleach, MHA, and One Piece
3/23/2023 c37 3NpcEmi
between the same pet names, names and similarities. jack and maddie are so dense...I cant believe they havent caught on by now.
3NpcEmibetween the same pet names, names and similarities. jack and maddie are so dense...I cant believe they havent caught on by now.
3/19/2023 c1 InvcShadow Sucks
come to your profile because you were recommended as good naruto writer, but you deleted the stories
bring them back asshole
come to your profile because you were recommended as good naruto writer, but you deleted the stories
bring them back asshole
3/2/2023 c59 68Fanreader26
so, wait, are you not going to finish this story here? please don't just stop the story here and at least cross upload on both FF net and AO3
68Fanreader26so, wait, are you not going to finish this story here? please don't just stop the story here and at least cross upload on both FF net and AO3
11/29/2022 c58 Kaleigh
Awesome story when is the next update?
Awesome story when is the next update?
11/30/2022 c14 MrNovak
Rwby was a fantastic show. I liked seeing the song again after all this time. Too bad the show went down hill after the original creator died.
Although gotta admit, Ruby Rose’s character design and concept were and are still badass and awesome.
Rwby was a fantastic show. I liked seeing the song again after all this time. Too bad the show went down hill after the original creator died.
Although gotta admit, Ruby Rose’s character design and concept were and are still badass and awesome.
8/27/2022 c58 Guest
Please continue. Don’t leave us on a cliffhanger like that lol
Please continue. Don’t leave us on a cliffhanger like that lol