for The Shinobi God of the Straw Hat Pirates5/8 c1 doodlyelisa
Your story" The Shinobi God of the Straw Hat Pirates
" echoes with ancient bloodlines and quiet sorrow. They called you a prodigy a cursed weapon but you carried something far greater: a heart brave enough to feel. I'm a commission based digital artist, and your story truly inspired me. I would be thrilled to adapt it into a comic. If you're interested or would like to see my portfolio, feel free to contact me on Discord: doodlyelisa.
Your story" The Shinobi God of the Straw Hat Pirates
" echoes with ancient bloodlines and quiet sorrow. They called you a prodigy a cursed weapon but you carried something far greater: a heart brave enough to feel. I'm a commission based digital artist, and your story truly inspired me. I would be thrilled to adapt it into a comic. If you're interested or would like to see my portfolio, feel free to contact me on Discord: doodlyelisa.
7/14/2021 c1 Guest
Make more chapters
Make more chapters
4/23/2021 c1 
1Trithankar
Could have used a little more oomph on the story. While the plot is great along with the start, it feels like you lost the will to write the story further, could have made straw hats suspicious of naruto, could have made naruto suspicious of them, not accept them right off the bat... Bit more flare and drame is needed but ok story and great potential plot.
1TrithankarCould have used a little more oomph on the story. While the plot is great along with the start, it feels like you lost the will to write the story further, could have made straw hats suspicious of naruto, could have made naruto suspicious of them, not accept them right off the bat... Bit more flare and drame is needed but ok story and great potential plot.
4/25/2020 c1 Guest
It ain't the sharinnegan you retarded fuck it's just a mutation of the normal Rinnegan
It ain't the sharinnegan you retarded fuck it's just a mutation of the normal Rinnegan
1/10/2020 c1 Guest
Too fast ..take it slow and Don't let Naruto blabber everything..and Luffy I can understand being friendly instant but others hell no...
Too fast ..take it slow and Don't let Naruto blabber everything..and Luffy I can understand being friendly instant but others hell no...
5/23/2019 c1 Guest
Update or remake
Update or remake
12/21/2018 c1 Guest
Please don’t make this a harem there are too many of those on these crossovers
Please don’t make this a harem there are too many of those on these crossovers
12/19/2018 c1 justinmil22
if this is going to continue you should add robin to the pairing as she would be super fascinated by Naruto history his eyes and the history of his world plus their similar background with a crap childhood would help too
if this is going to continue you should add robin to the pairing as she would be super fascinated by Naruto history his eyes and the history of his world plus their similar background with a crap childhood would help too