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6/10 c9 WhiskeySama
Pretty sure Obi Wan took out Grievous before order 66 happened.
10/2/2019 c3 Guest
Interesting idea, but could use some editing. Most immediate issues are the chapter lengths and switching perspectives. While switching perspective can be a powerful tool, it’s best used when limited and shows the events that some of the cast wouldn’t be privy to or show a larger event through multiple, often different, perspectives. Secondly, the paragraphs are only broken up by shifting perspectives. Good luck on the story
2/15/2019 c2 Jose19
The people should not be called younglings since they are not force sensitive, and it is not socially correct.
2/15/2019 c1 Jose19
This has to be more than just arriving on Earth because is Earth a unexplored region for the a Republic or something else.
1/16/2019 c9 Bladekotsu
Terrific chapter as always, but isnt Grievous just a cyborg and not a Sith, i mean thats the reason why Palpatine make him a cyborg because his skills would never be enough to defeat a Jedi
12/20/2018 c1 1keybladelight
The arrive of hope and the arrival of one the last jedi.
12/20/2018 c1 12Tiger2014
Awesome, dude. So far, it's good. I hope you'll continue soon.

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