for Spider-Man: Love Across Dimensions8/26 c10 Electri spider
This is one of the coolest fanfic i have read good luck and keep going
This is one of the coolest fanfic i have read good luck and keep going
7/29 c9 
1RomeoDreamWriter
Yeah, no. Marvel definitely likes to fuck with us. Sakura Spider? I think you mean Spider-chako, because she's practically a complete copy-paste of the pink Mochi lover.
1RomeoDreamWriterYeah, no. Marvel definitely likes to fuck with us. Sakura Spider? I think you mean Spider-chako, because she's practically a complete copy-paste of the pink Mochi lover.
6/7 c10 2Kidofnowhere
I like where this is going. I don't know if you should add some more girls for now. I think you should focus on Peter's daily routine, and developing the relationship between the girls.
Some girl I would like to see is Betty Brantt (either the main version or the one who got the spider powers) and the Liz Allen from the Spectacular series. I also think you should use Olivia character some more I think she is a little underrated character.
2KidofnowhereI like where this is going. I don't know if you should add some more girls for now. I think you should focus on Peter's daily routine, and developing the relationship between the girls.
Some girl I would like to see is Betty Brantt (either the main version or the one who got the spider powers) and the Liz Allen from the Spectacular series. I also think you should use Olivia character some more I think she is a little underrated character.
5/27 c10 Guest
Hello there
Found your story a while ago and I really liked it. Lucky it got an update just now as well. I loved the interaction between Peter and his romantic interests so far. The lemon was fine and really waiting for Cindy's turn next. Can't wait to see how her interaction with Peter will turn out.
About the new story idea you mentioned I really think you should go with it. Mato seihei no slave has surprisingly good storyline and characters for a harem story. I like the women centric theme of the story so I hope you'll keep it. So i am excited for the new story. It's a shame the series doesn't have many fanfics.
And I'm glad that you will be using yuuki as the protagonist since most of the mato fics are crossovers or oc self inserts which just replace yuuki as protagonist. It'll be really nice to see a Yuuki centered story. Maybe a yuuki who met kyouka early and grew up with her thus helping her trauma of her hometown. And also attracting attention of the rest of the mato corps. I know the story isn't confirmed yet but i really hope you'll do it.
That's all from me. Eagerly waiting for the next update and the story. Best of luck for both.
Hello there
Found your story a while ago and I really liked it. Lucky it got an update just now as well. I loved the interaction between Peter and his romantic interests so far. The lemon was fine and really waiting for Cindy's turn next. Can't wait to see how her interaction with Peter will turn out.
About the new story idea you mentioned I really think you should go with it. Mato seihei no slave has surprisingly good storyline and characters for a harem story. I like the women centric theme of the story so I hope you'll keep it. So i am excited for the new story. It's a shame the series doesn't have many fanfics.
And I'm glad that you will be using yuuki as the protagonist since most of the mato fics are crossovers or oc self inserts which just replace yuuki as protagonist. It'll be really nice to see a Yuuki centered story. Maybe a yuuki who met kyouka early and grew up with her thus helping her trauma of her hometown. And also attracting attention of the rest of the mato corps. I know the story isn't confirmed yet but i really hope you'll do it.
That's all from me. Eagerly waiting for the next update and the story. Best of luck for both.
5/26 c10 27InsaneMakaioshin
1. Translation machines are awesome.
2. HAHAHA! I doubt they're going to keep it in their pants.
27InsaneMakaioshin1. Translation machines are awesome.
2. HAHAHA! I doubt they're going to keep it in their pants.