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12/28/2018 c1 Flameis
Good story so far. Would love to see more.
12/22/2018 c1 Kivdon
Good on you for making changes. Of course, I should probably mention that there’s also a “James” in Halo canon too. He was a spartan on 117’s team during the fall of Reach.
Now, he’s just a minor character in a single book, so if you really want to keep the name, it wouldn’t be TOO confusing. If it was me, I’d change it, but it’s your story and your choice.
12/20/2018 c1 Kivdon
Capitalization could use some work in a few places.

Your story description is very bad. Don’t apologize, or put any meta comments in it.

Is this the Carter from Reach? It doesn’t seem like it. Never name an OC the same name as an established canon character. It confuses everybody.

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