
9/24/2022 c28 ZippyDGodSlayer
Love it
Love it
9/7/2022 c211 Youknowkakarot
VANYSA AND DEMIURGE THIS IS WILD I LIKE IT BEEN WANTING MY BOY TO FIND SOMEONE
VANYSA AND DEMIURGE THIS IS WILD I LIKE IT BEEN WANTING MY BOY TO FIND SOMEONE
9/5/2022 c151 Youknowkakarot
Bro Neia is THE DAUGHTER OF AINZ OOAL GOWN she even hit the arms out pose on the bro
Bro Neia is THE DAUGHTER OF AINZ OOAL GOWN she even hit the arms out pose on the bro
9/5/2022 c149 Youknowkakarot
Bro Neia is THE DAUGHTER OF AINZ OOAL GOWN she even hit the arms out to embrace with the black aura SHE THE GOAT THEEEEE GOATTTTTTT
Bro Neia is THE DAUGHTER OF AINZ OOAL GOWN she even hit the arms out to embrace with the black aura SHE THE GOAT THEEEEE GOATTTTTTT
8/29/2022 c214 Silentseeker
This was probably the best fan adaptation I’ve ever read so thank you for this I may be a little late but what ever.
This was probably the best fan adaptation I’ve ever read so thank you for this I may be a little late but what ever.
8/5/2022 c61 volgang
Aren"t the black scriptures her friends? At least the captain? Don't remember if they seemed close
Aren"t the black scriptures her friends? At least the captain? Don't remember if they seemed close
8/5/2022 c60 volgang
It only takes a day for mana to recharge. It should anyway. So saving mana the whole trip is just wasteful.
It only takes a day for mana to recharge. It should anyway. So saving mana the whole trip is just wasteful.
7/20/2022 c2
1DeOPOrange
Damn bro, reading this AN, you really are a bit of a dick yourself. I'm sure nobody who doesn't like this fic abused your idiotic delaying of chapters scheme at all by spamming reviews on your side stories.

Damn bro, reading this AN, you really are a bit of a dick yourself. I'm sure nobody who doesn't like this fic abused your idiotic delaying of chapters scheme at all by spamming reviews on your side stories.
6/30/2022 c116
7ThatRabidPotato
So close to offing the Mary Sue OC Skana, yet of course it was never to be. You REALLY, REALLY, hate Remedios; two stories and two climactic battles where Neia kicks her ass. Even the same "Holy Strike shows Neia's good but Remedios doesn't believe it" twist.

So close to offing the Mary Sue OC Skana, yet of course it was never to be. You REALLY, REALLY, hate Remedios; two stories and two climactic battles where Neia kicks her ass. Even the same "Holy Strike shows Neia's good but Remedios doesn't believe it" twist.
6/30/2022 c114 ThatRabidPotato
She could never actually answer the things he said. Just "well, the Sorcerer King loves his servants, and I'm his servant, so haha screw you I win". Which is true enough, Ainz and those who follow him inevitably win, history is written by the victors, might makes right, etc etc.
But there was no justice done here. Just vengeance. Ironic for a "God of Justice".
She could never actually answer the things he said. Just "well, the Sorcerer King loves his servants, and I'm his servant, so haha screw you I win". Which is true enough, Ainz and those who follow him inevitably win, history is written by the victors, might makes right, etc etc.
But there was no justice done here. Just vengeance. Ironic for a "God of Justice".
6/30/2022 c113 ThatRabidPotato
Astraka literally just had her whipped. And that was after she tried to kill him first! This is what comes of not rereading your own story- you're not writing what you think you are.
Astraka literally just had her whipped. And that was after she tried to kill him first! This is what comes of not rereading your own story- you're not writing what you think you are.
6/30/2022 c106 ThatRabidPotato
Seriously! Go back and read what you actually wrote! You seem to have constructed something much more elaborate than what happened. What Astraka did is PEANUTS.
Seriously! Go back and read what you actually wrote! You seem to have constructed something much more elaborate than what happened. What Astraka did is PEANUTS.
6/30/2022 c105 ThatRabidPotato
You need to go reread your own relevant chapters here. Vanysa was only in the dungeon for ONE day before she killed herself. There was no wooden horse. Just like with Philip, you seem to believe that you've written Astraka as a much worse dude than he actually is.
You need to go reread your own relevant chapters here. Vanysa was only in the dungeon for ONE day before she killed herself. There was no wooden horse. Just like with Philip, you seem to believe that you've written Astraka as a much worse dude than he actually is.
6/30/2022 c102 ThatRabidPotato
I know it's not going to happen, but I dearly want either Skana or Neia to get killed in the upcoming battle.
I know it's not going to happen, but I dearly want either Skana or Neia to get killed in the upcoming battle.