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4/25/2003 c2 Violation
Dare I mention that Nuriko is a guy? ::grins:: Well, you *DID* mention him as "she" in quite a few places...

How do "organs" twist out of place when you're having sex? ::is clueless:: Erm...

-.-;; Fix it up, and I may like it. The theme and the idea is very cute, but you've got a lot of work to do on this.

-Shadow Katana: Schizoprenic Assasin
4/25/2003 c2 HOlly
I really liked your story. I hope that you write another chapter or two to this one. I want to know what happens between Tasuki and Chichiri next.

please contact me when you write more thanks.
4/23/2003 c2 6Bunny6
That was so sweet. I liked it alot.
4/23/2003 c1 19Lifelessmidget
ish gud, funni tooh ^-^
4/21/2003 c2 Flighting dreams
this story is a bit .. wierd @.@

everyone (or almost everyone) is OOC~~ especially nuriko. ...

oh yea~ and where IS tamahome and miaka, anyway?

oh well~

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