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11/22/2021 c20 Guest
I’m hooked please don’t leave me hanging I need an update
9/27/2021 c20 TrickyTwist
This is an awesome premise! I've really enjoyed reading up to this point, I love the whole John Wick feel.
I think there's a bit of clean up to do in the presentation of the story. Right now the it reads a bit like a movie script. I think if you spend some time on developing each character from a third-person perspective, as opposed to their emotional perspective, this story will feel more balanced. I suppose you could lean into the script style too; more action less detail. That tends to leave out some of the romance in my opinion, and I so enjoy the romance.
Either way I hope you keep writing and building this story, I cannot wait to see how JJ will handle Emily's darker tendancies. So far, she has been drawn to Emily "like a magnet" and I'm hoping for a show of that patented Jareau determination. Emily is an interesting combination of characteristics that intregues me. I hope she will learn to let JJ in. She seems to have developed a 'working persona' that emulates the emotions she's disconnected from. The way I'm reading, she is already starting to blur the edges of presenting vs. feeling those emotions.
Thanks for sharing this fic, I'm excited to see where it goes.
5/9/2021 c20 Guest
Poor Jeremy...thanks for the update! Can't wait for more! Thank you
4/25/2021 c20 manticore-gurl071134
LOL nicely done! Thanks :)
2/7/2021 c19 Rex
Hi, I love this story thus far and am exhilarated by Emily’s dark background! Please update it again soon, I look forward to reading the next chapter(s).
2/5/2021 c19 manticore-gurl071134
ooh great update, thanks :)
12/13/2020 c17 takamachi
I'm glad JJ being spoiled by Emily. Looks like they are good for each other.
12/12/2020 c17 rmpcmfan
At least JJ will be having fun.
12/12/2020 c16 rmpcmfan
A private jet and a hotel she owns, not bad!
12/12/2020 c15 rmpcmfan
I really like Dr Isles. Good choice.
12/12/2020 c14 rmpcmfan
Emily is amazing, so kickass!
12/12/2020 c17 manticore-gurl071134
Great update! Thanks :)
12/2/2020 c16 Kelsey
Can't wait to see the next chapter! really liking what you have so far
10/30/2020 c16 manticore-gurl071134
ooohhh great update! nice to see them talking! hope Jeremy pulls through. on the fence on her bringing JJ. lol.
10/25/2020 c15 manticore-gurl071134
Great update! Hope JJ will be okay.
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