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6/25 c2 Guest
4/16 c1 Steve jobs
Why are you putting me in your fanfic
6/2/2019 c4 7Black Bankai
That was really good
3/1/2019 c3 Black Bankai
2/26/2019 c3 Murcielgo
Im liking it more, keep it up
2/6/2019 c2 Black Bankai
That was awesome please update soon.
1/28/2019 c2 Guest
When the next part ?
1/7/2019 c2 Murcielgo
Getting a bit more interesting. Grammer is good. Lil short chapter a bit longer and i wouldnt have any complaints
12/30/2018 c1 Murcielgo
Its kinda iffy. But very interesting, please do check your punctuation and stuff. And you dont necessarily need to censor shit
12/27/2018 c1 Zexceed
Me gusta este primer capĂ­tulo, espero el siguiente
12/24/2018 c1 guest
plot is good, however punctuation should be improved
12/24/2018 c1 guest
The plot is quite interesting, however the ending of they 1st chapter was slightly confusing because of punctuation. You might want to revise they story for capitalization.

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