for The Story of the Child of prophecy3/28 c1 masofi
Se ve que puede ser muy buena historia, me encantaria si la siguieras se ve buena idea
Se ve que puede ser muy buena historia, me encantaria si la siguieras se ve buena idea
3/24/2019 c1 
5Veloran-Darkfyre
This has great promise. It was only a little hard for me to follow, but the story has a decent path to go by. I have many questions that weren't answered with this Chapter, and would like for you to maybe write some more. If you need a Beta to help with the dialogue, I could take up that mantle. Consider this a thanks to reading and reviewing my own Story, and let me know what you think about your Review.
5Veloran-DarkfyreThis has great promise. It was only a little hard for me to follow, but the story has a decent path to go by. I have many questions that weren't answered with this Chapter, and would like for you to maybe write some more. If you need a Beta to help with the dialogue, I could take up that mantle. Consider this a thanks to reading and reviewing my own Story, and let me know what you think about your Review.
2/8/2019 c1 Gargshubham12
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12/28/2018 c1 King of Konoha
I love the start of this story. Im interested to see if team 7 fighting styles is different from canon, obviously Naruto is but i hope sakura is to and not just a medic like usual.
I love the start of this story. Im interested to see if team 7 fighting styles is different from canon, obviously Naruto is but i hope sakura is to and not just a medic like usual.