for Ride or Die3/8/2019 c1 Guest
I HONESTLY DONT UNDERSTAND WHY THIS HAS LESS REVIEWS WHEN IT DESERVES SO MUCH LOVE? THANK YOU FOR THIS AND FOR KEEPING ZUTARA ALIVE ALL THESE YEARS 3
I HONESTLY DONT UNDERSTAND WHY THIS HAS LESS REVIEWS WHEN IT DESERVES SO MUCH LOVE? THANK YOU FOR THIS AND FOR KEEPING ZUTARA ALIVE ALL THESE YEARS 3
2/6/2019 c1 
1blueandie
[Those words lit a cold flame within me. The monster inside me had been buried for years, just waiting to be unleashed.]
I really liked how you wrote the introspection in this story. It was an interesting dive into Katara’s thought process throughout the build-up and confrontation with Yon Rha and there were some clever divergent moments from canon. I liked this bit of dialogue from her argument with Aang - "Aang, I understand that you want to resolve this peacefully, but this is not your fight”, as well as the strength in this bit - "But my mother? She's never coming back." Both these bits showed hints of Katara’s world view as well as her anger behind her desire to get revenge.
The travelling scenes were well done. I enjoyed the additional details you added in, such as Katara feeling sick at hearing of further raids being planned, and this part was great – “The ride is supposed to be calming, with the smooth, blue water around me and whatnot, but it's everything but calming. Even the soft light of the moon can't calm my nerves.” Her thought process about who she is was probably my favourite moment of this story, and there was a maturity that came through in how she sees herself as well as others see her. I particularly liked this bit – “There is a darkness within me that I've kept at bay for so long and I'm not sure how long I can keep it contained”, and “They don't see the girl who is slowly breaking, slowly crumbling...” Her confusion over whether Sokka says she reminds him of his Mom and the mention of how alone she felt in the aftermath of the crystal cave discussion with Zuko were both well done.
Loved this bit from Zuko – “That stuff will eat you alive and you have to realize that there is no changing the past, only the present”. I liked how you wrote the part where he was afraid of the “hatred and venom in her eyes” and the realisation that he didn’t realise she “possessed that kind of power”, nor that the power even existed. The confrontation with Yon Rha was great, including the changes you made to the scene, particularly liked this line – “Sweat slowly trickled down my face and my palms began to feel clammy as I realized I'm about to face the man who broke my family”. The aftermath was well done, especially the need to run from the scene once she had decided not to kill him. Sweet moment between Katara and Zuko, really liked this bit – [He broke away with wide eyes. "W-What?"] This was a great take on the scene!
1blueandie[Those words lit a cold flame within me. The monster inside me had been buried for years, just waiting to be unleashed.]
I really liked how you wrote the introspection in this story. It was an interesting dive into Katara’s thought process throughout the build-up and confrontation with Yon Rha and there were some clever divergent moments from canon. I liked this bit of dialogue from her argument with Aang - "Aang, I understand that you want to resolve this peacefully, but this is not your fight”, as well as the strength in this bit - "But my mother? She's never coming back." Both these bits showed hints of Katara’s world view as well as her anger behind her desire to get revenge.
The travelling scenes were well done. I enjoyed the additional details you added in, such as Katara feeling sick at hearing of further raids being planned, and this part was great – “The ride is supposed to be calming, with the smooth, blue water around me and whatnot, but it's everything but calming. Even the soft light of the moon can't calm my nerves.” Her thought process about who she is was probably my favourite moment of this story, and there was a maturity that came through in how she sees herself as well as others see her. I particularly liked this bit – “There is a darkness within me that I've kept at bay for so long and I'm not sure how long I can keep it contained”, and “They don't see the girl who is slowly breaking, slowly crumbling...” Her confusion over whether Sokka says she reminds him of his Mom and the mention of how alone she felt in the aftermath of the crystal cave discussion with Zuko were both well done.
Loved this bit from Zuko – “That stuff will eat you alive and you have to realize that there is no changing the past, only the present”. I liked how you wrote the part where he was afraid of the “hatred and venom in her eyes” and the realisation that he didn’t realise she “possessed that kind of power”, nor that the power even existed. The confrontation with Yon Rha was great, including the changes you made to the scene, particularly liked this line – “Sweat slowly trickled down my face and my palms began to feel clammy as I realized I'm about to face the man who broke my family”. The aftermath was well done, especially the need to run from the scene once she had decided not to kill him. Sweet moment between Katara and Zuko, really liked this bit – [He broke away with wide eyes. "W-What?"] This was a great take on the scene!
12/27/2018 c1 Kihara
Sis...this is the content this fandom deserved instead of the bullshit canon ships they threw at us ...yuuurttt
Sis...this is the content this fandom deserved instead of the bullshit canon ships they threw at us ...yuuurttt
12/27/2018 c1 Guest
Great story! I love that Katara finally stopped mothering Aang.
Great story! I love that Katara finally stopped mothering Aang.
12/28/2018 c1 10RouseDragusha
I see your fanfic on twitter
It's glad to see a new and great zutara fanfiction, i really like your history.
10RouseDragushaI see your fanfic on twitter
It's glad to see a new and great zutara fanfiction, i really like your history.