for Rise from the Ashes1/11/2019 c3 Puck627
I LOVE THIS STORY A LOT! Having Harry team up with Icy, Darcy and Stormy is a great idea, but are you going to make it so Harry loves with one of the Trix or all three of them? But ether way I can not wait to see what comes next, so please make more chapters as soon as you can. PS are you going to let Harry and the Trix have and magical familiar like four dragons for each of them a fire one for Harry, an frost one for Icy, a storm one for Stormy and a darkness one for Darcy or some other creatures for they're familiars. Anyway do what you think is best and keep up the great work!
I LOVE THIS STORY A LOT! Having Harry team up with Icy, Darcy and Stormy is a great idea, but are you going to make it so Harry loves with one of the Trix or all three of them? But ether way I can not wait to see what comes next, so please make more chapters as soon as you can. PS are you going to let Harry and the Trix have and magical familiar like four dragons for each of them a fire one for Harry, an frost one for Icy, a storm one for Stormy and a darkness one for Darcy or some other creatures for they're familiars. Anyway do what you think is best and keep up the great work!
1/11/2019 c3 nightmaster000
Another truly brilliant chapter. Harry has succeeded where Darkar failed and gotten the Crystal of Power, leading to one hell of a power up for him. As well as the Trix through their newly created Dark Mark Link.
Darcy did bring up a important question/point, on just why did the Knights remove them from Relix just to take them to Omega. While Icy and Stormy might think they we're already on their way, I think there's a lot more to the story there. So I don't think this the last time this little topic will be brought up.
We see a great divergence from canon where Stormy's original suggestion of going to Darkar Fortress for a current home/base, is the path/plan chosen. I think it fits having Harry go there since he is in a way Darkar successor if you think about it.
I LOVE the make over Harry gave the Fortress I think it fits to have a new look since it's under new management. I also love it's new name/title in Citadel of Night as well quite fitting.
I loved seeing the Trix find out a bit more about Harry's past, and the Magical world/society he's from. Their going to be in for a shock when they find out Harry's from Earth, since everyone in the Magical Galaxy thinks there's no magic on Earth.
It certainly seems like the more the Trix learn about Harry the more interested they get. So it's probably only a matter of time before all three decide he's a keeper and marriage material. Heck it seems Darcy has already decided that without the marriage detail anyway.
I really like the point Harry brought up where people good or evil usually always have a reason for wanting power. Where unlike the Trix who seemed to have wanted power for the sake of well power, others usually have reasons behind it as well as a goal to motivate them. I wonder if any of them will think about the point Harry brought up later on.
The Trix aren't going to give up on revenge against the Winx Club, but a good point is brought up in Harry not having a reason to help them. So that raises the question on how the Trix will secure his help?
So all together brilliant and very enjoyable chapter. Though one little thing is kinda of bothering me a bit. It's brought up that Harry despite being skilled in guarding his mined isn't that great at Legilimency. But if he is bad at it than how did he gain the knowledge other prisoners of Omega held without using that skill?
Another truly brilliant chapter. Harry has succeeded where Darkar failed and gotten the Crystal of Power, leading to one hell of a power up for him. As well as the Trix through their newly created Dark Mark Link.
Darcy did bring up a important question/point, on just why did the Knights remove them from Relix just to take them to Omega. While Icy and Stormy might think they we're already on their way, I think there's a lot more to the story there. So I don't think this the last time this little topic will be brought up.
We see a great divergence from canon where Stormy's original suggestion of going to Darkar Fortress for a current home/base, is the path/plan chosen. I think it fits having Harry go there since he is in a way Darkar successor if you think about it.
I LOVE the make over Harry gave the Fortress I think it fits to have a new look since it's under new management. I also love it's new name/title in Citadel of Night as well quite fitting.
I loved seeing the Trix find out a bit more about Harry's past, and the Magical world/society he's from. Their going to be in for a shock when they find out Harry's from Earth, since everyone in the Magical Galaxy thinks there's no magic on Earth.
It certainly seems like the more the Trix learn about Harry the more interested they get. So it's probably only a matter of time before all three decide he's a keeper and marriage material. Heck it seems Darcy has already decided that without the marriage detail anyway.
I really like the point Harry brought up where people good or evil usually always have a reason for wanting power. Where unlike the Trix who seemed to have wanted power for the sake of well power, others usually have reasons behind it as well as a goal to motivate them. I wonder if any of them will think about the point Harry brought up later on.
The Trix aren't going to give up on revenge against the Winx Club, but a good point is brought up in Harry not having a reason to help them. So that raises the question on how the Trix will secure his help?
So all together brilliant and very enjoyable chapter. Though one little thing is kinda of bothering me a bit. It's brought up that Harry despite being skilled in guarding his mined isn't that great at Legilimency. But if he is bad at it than how did he gain the knowledge other prisoners of Omega held without using that skill?
1/11/2019 c3 tensei32
The way this is going, I've got a feeling this will shift from a rated "T" to "M" before too long. And I am ok with that :P
The way this is going, I've got a feeling this will shift from a rated "T" to "M" before too long. And I am ok with that :P
1/11/2019 c3 Guest
- whoa the changes harry made sound awesome
- dunno about the pairing though since the trix seem to lack any redeaming qualities
- Just because Harry seems powerful I hope you dont stop him from continuing to grow in general even if not in power there's always knowledge skill and abilities
- whoa the changes harry made sound awesome
- dunno about the pairing though since the trix seem to lack any redeaming qualities
- Just because Harry seems powerful I hope you dont stop him from continuing to grow in general even if not in power there's always knowledge skill and abilities
1/11/2019 c3 
1YeTianshi
It was a really nice chapter, the small reveal Harry gives to the Strix and their reaction was interesting, can't wait for both sides to find out more about each other and see what happens. I also wonder what Harry is planning to do, I get that some form of vengeance on his own world would make sense, but I don't see a reason as to why he would help the Trix in their bid for domination.
Eh, I suppose we'll find out. Thanks for the chapter, it was a joy to read :D
P.S.
Thanks for replying and clearing up my previous review.
1YeTianshiIt was a really nice chapter, the small reveal Harry gives to the Strix and their reaction was interesting, can't wait for both sides to find out more about each other and see what happens. I also wonder what Harry is planning to do, I get that some form of vengeance on his own world would make sense, but I don't see a reason as to why he would help the Trix in their bid for domination.
Eh, I suppose we'll find out. Thanks for the chapter, it was a joy to read :D
P.S.
Thanks for replying and clearing up my previous review.
1/11/2019 c3 Guest
Nice but Pkw
war dont kill the winx
Nice but Pkw
war dont kill the winx
1/11/2019 c3 Guest
Nice I am looking forward for another chapter but also the reaction of other people if tbey come to his house
Nice I am looking forward for another chapter but also the reaction of other people if tbey come to his house
1/10/2019 c2 YeTianshi
It's interesting and I like it so far. I think I especially liked Darcy's interactions with Harry in the beginning. I'm curious to see how it all goes on.
It's interesting and I like it so far. I think I especially liked Darcy's interactions with Harry in the beginning. I'm curious to see how it all goes on.
1/10/2019 c1 YeTianshi
Epic! Not only is Harry OP, but I so rarely find a Winx crossover that's good. Now I have another in my tiny collection xD
Also, doesn't the caster need consensus to put the dark mark on someone?
Epic! Not only is Harry OP, but I so rarely find a Winx crossover that's good. Now I have another in my tiny collection xD
Also, doesn't the caster need consensus to put the dark mark on someone?
1/7/2019 c1 nightmaster000
I really do like this entire idea behind this story. I'm really eager to see how Harry taking Valtor's place as the newest enemy of the Winx Club will affect/change things, and diverge from canon as well.
It will certainly be interesting how Harry's first meeting with the Winx Club will go that's for sure. Especially in the case of Bloom because as one reviewer has pointed out they certainly are similar. Both of them heroes that who had more to them and family/history than they thought, and they we're both suddenly very unexpectedly thrust into a world of magic. So I could see Harry picking up on the parallels between him and Bloom, when/if he learn's more about her history.
I'm loving how Harry's interacted with the Trix so far in the story. Though the second chapter does have me wondering if we'll see the rating raised, and if we can expect any lemons later in the story.
OH also will this strictly be a Harry/Trix pairing or will any other girls develop a interest in Harry? I ask mainly out of curiosity, and just to be clear I have no problem with it staying just Harry and the Trix girls. I've actually become quite a fan of the pairing you've made here.
One final question I ask because I liked the Pixies especially Zing in Winx Club. Any chance of Zing meeting Harry, and somehow ending up being his Bonded Pixie? After all I could see Pixies being able to bond with more than just Fairies. I really like Zing and the idea of become I guess a Dark Pixie seems like a interesting. Plus I could see her as a interesting foil to Harry and maybe the Trix as well.
Also I think it might cause some interesting drama for the Winx Girls especially Aisha having a friend become a enemy.
I really do like this entire idea behind this story. I'm really eager to see how Harry taking Valtor's place as the newest enemy of the Winx Club will affect/change things, and diverge from canon as well.
It will certainly be interesting how Harry's first meeting with the Winx Club will go that's for sure. Especially in the case of Bloom because as one reviewer has pointed out they certainly are similar. Both of them heroes that who had more to them and family/history than they thought, and they we're both suddenly very unexpectedly thrust into a world of magic. So I could see Harry picking up on the parallels between him and Bloom, when/if he learn's more about her history.
I'm loving how Harry's interacted with the Trix so far in the story. Though the second chapter does have me wondering if we'll see the rating raised, and if we can expect any lemons later in the story.
OH also will this strictly be a Harry/Trix pairing or will any other girls develop a interest in Harry? I ask mainly out of curiosity, and just to be clear I have no problem with it staying just Harry and the Trix girls. I've actually become quite a fan of the pairing you've made here.
One final question I ask because I liked the Pixies especially Zing in Winx Club. Any chance of Zing meeting Harry, and somehow ending up being his Bonded Pixie? After all I could see Pixies being able to bond with more than just Fairies. I really like Zing and the idea of become I guess a Dark Pixie seems like a interesting. Plus I could see her as a interesting foil to Harry and maybe the Trix as well.
Also I think it might cause some interesting drama for the Winx Girls especially Aisha having a friend become a enemy.
1/7/2019 c2 nightmaster000
Really awesome to see you have made this a full length story. I really love how things are progressing so far, and i'm most certainly eager to read more. :)
Really awesome to see you have made this a full length story. I really love how things are progressing so far, and i'm most certainly eager to read more. :)
1/7/2019 c2 Guest
Love this and I eagerly await more I honestly only know a little about Winx but so far several interesting plot/lore is being explored and I might just look it up
Love this and I eagerly await more I honestly only know a little about Winx but so far several interesting plot/lore is being explored and I might just look it up