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12/18/2019 c1 Scissors Dolphin
Learn the difference between "your" and "you're".
11/7/2019 c1 Herpes
Quite the rare gem hidden here, you have a great plot and story line to make it into a full fledge crossover, pity it's a one shot.
3/4/2019 c1 5JohnyXD
I liked this a lot. I wish you could develop this into a much longer fanfic. It has a lot of potential.
1/3/2019 c1 28Kairan1979
If it was multi-chapter fanfic instead of one-shot, it could be better.
1/1/2019 c1 5plums
Maybe stick with vignettes then? It’s an interesting concept, and maybe write a “Harry meets X” character and a chapter or two per girl who joins up

Would allow you to let the stories build on each other, be related, but you wouldn’t have to really keep them “in order” of how they met, or focus on the battles they fought, just the meetings, etc.

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