
5/19/2019 c10 Guestman
Interesting plot developments, grammar could use some work though. Good story so far!
Interesting plot developments, grammar could use some work though. Good story so far!
1/6/2019 c1
13TheDevilsMusic
I would say all three and if you could, could you please try and put a bit more effort into grammar and the sorts other than that this is a very good piece of work you got keep it up

I would say all three and if you could, could you please try and put a bit more effort into grammar and the sorts other than that this is a very good piece of work you got keep it up