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I honestly don't like leaving comments, but this would be a mistake. I'm writing this while I'm rereading everything from the beginning, which I've never done, and I'm as excited about each chapter as I am for the first time!
I originally came across "Fate" on ao3 when I was looking for Ron-related works, and seeing over 150 chapters at the time, I didn't want to read it (I was looking for shorter stories)... But after a while I decided to start reading it and regretted not starting earlier. This story sank into my soul like nothing else. Everything I have written here is only the little that I was able to describe in words, and I am incredibly sad that I will never be able to share the rest.
When I first came to look at the story here, I was stunned to see that the work has been written since 2019 (if you believe the dates haha (I'm worried, suddenly there are some mistakes)). And the chapters continue to come out and delight to this day. It's amazing.
Rereading, it's hard not to notice your notes to the chapters, whatever they are. I really enjoyed reading each one. For me, such works become so alive, and that the author himself is really interested, that he leaves something interesting outside the chapters of the story, or some warnings. It was also nice to reread and stumble upon moments that could somehow indicate events in future chapters (I would like to believe that I think correctly).
And I hope I remember correctly how Ron found the egg (Basilisk?) in the Chamber of Secrets. It still haunts me, haha. It will be very interesting to finally find out whose egg it is.
I regret that I may not notice or not understand some details that are hidden in the text and that most likely give many answers and new questions. But I hope and am sure that there are people who notice and do not leave this aside.
I usually express my emotions about the work, without pointing out any flaws(often I don’t even notice them, absorbed in reading) or events in the chapters. I hope this doesn’t bother you in any way? I'm very worried about posting this comment, what if I say something wrong? What if I unintentionally offend someone? I really hope not, and if so, I apologize with all my heart! I just really wanted to express my best feelings (there can be no other) about this work. And, to be honest, I would really like more people to know about it! But I can't muster up the courage to post anything about this work (I would really like to translate it into my native language. English is not my native language and I would like to apologize for any mistakes, I use a translator.), because suddenly the author is against it. I really wouldn't want to do something knowing that the author could be against it.
I have no idea what will happen next in this story. The last chapters surprised me a lot, in a good way. I would so like to write about each chapter, about all the events in them, but I think it would be too much.
All the best to the author, this story is loved.
I honestly don't like leaving comments, but this would be a mistake. I'm writing this while I'm rereading everything from the beginning, which I've never done, and I'm as excited about each chapter as I am for the first time!
I originally came across "Fate" on ao3 when I was looking for Ron-related works, and seeing over 150 chapters at the time, I didn't want to read it (I was looking for shorter stories)... But after a while I decided to start reading it and regretted not starting earlier. This story sank into my soul like nothing else. Everything I have written here is only the little that I was able to describe in words, and I am incredibly sad that I will never be able to share the rest.
When I first came to look at the story here, I was stunned to see that the work has been written since 2019 (if you believe the dates haha (I'm worried, suddenly there are some mistakes)). And the chapters continue to come out and delight to this day. It's amazing.
Rereading, it's hard not to notice your notes to the chapters, whatever they are. I really enjoyed reading each one. For me, such works become so alive, and that the author himself is really interested, that he leaves something interesting outside the chapters of the story, or some warnings. It was also nice to reread and stumble upon moments that could somehow indicate events in future chapters (I would like to believe that I think correctly).
And I hope I remember correctly how Ron found the egg (Basilisk?) in the Chamber of Secrets. It still haunts me, haha. It will be very interesting to finally find out whose egg it is.
I regret that I may not notice or not understand some details that are hidden in the text and that most likely give many answers and new questions. But I hope and am sure that there are people who notice and do not leave this aside.
I usually express my emotions about the work, without pointing out any flaws(often I don’t even notice them, absorbed in reading) or events in the chapters. I hope this doesn’t bother you in any way? I'm very worried about posting this comment, what if I say something wrong? What if I unintentionally offend someone? I really hope not, and if so, I apologize with all my heart! I just really wanted to express my best feelings (there can be no other) about this work. And, to be honest, I would really like more people to know about it! But I can't muster up the courage to post anything about this work (I would really like to translate it into my native language. English is not my native language and I would like to apologize for any mistakes, I use a translator.), because suddenly the author is against it. I really wouldn't want to do something knowing that the author could be against it.
I have no idea what will happen next in this story. The last chapters surprised me a lot, in a good way. I would so like to write about each chapter, about all the events in them, but I think it would be too much.
All the best to the author, this story is loved.
5/8 c100 
18bauers374
Isn't self Checkmating illegal?
I mean I also learned that most tournements actually have conceedes way more than you'd think... as Not conceding is seen as you disrespecting their abilities
18bauers374Isn't self Checkmating illegal?
I mean I also learned that most tournements actually have conceedes way more than you'd think... as Not conceding is seen as you disrespecting their abilities
5/8 c99 bauers374
I found a continuity error...
The word Padawan didn't appear in Star Wars until The Phantom Menace's release in 1999...
(It was used in a draft for New Hope, but went unused)
So much like Dudley's playstation..
We've got a real world chronology problem
I found a continuity error...
The word Padawan didn't appear in Star Wars until The Phantom Menace's release in 1999...
(It was used in a draft for New Hope, but went unused)
So much like Dudley's playstation..
We've got a real world chronology problem
5/6 c97 bauers374
I wonder if we'll get to meet the french Branch of the Malfoys and or Lestranges in this fic
I wonder if we'll get to meet the french Branch of the Malfoys and or Lestranges in this fic
5/6 c97 bauers374
Okay so I'm guessing 'A Wizard's Desire' is basically a parody of indy Harry fics?
Judging by the name 'Hadrian'
Okay so I'm guessing 'A Wizard's Desire' is basically a parody of indy Harry fics?
Judging by the name 'Hadrian'
5/4 c94 bauers374
Wow, Pince being helpful and not just hoarding the books for once?
Ron really is amazing
Wow, Pince being helpful and not just hoarding the books for once?
Ron really is amazing
5/4 c169 Pcl
Wonderful Chapter,really enjoyed reading it!
Wonderful Chapter,really enjoyed reading it!
5/2 c89 bauers374
I love the idea of turning the chamber into a bunker...
It fits the HC that it was meant as a last line of defense so well
I love the idea of turning the chamber into a bunker...
It fits the HC that it was meant as a last line of defense so well
5/2 c169 Pk9809
Awesome chapter as always Spartan. Can't wait to see what Samara has cooked for Dumbledore.
Awesome chapter as always Spartan. Can't wait to see what Samara has cooked for Dumbledore.
4/29 c6 Rononono
i hope the author stops saying things in Ron's head and then immediately have another character say the say thing in later chapters.
i hope the author stops saying things in Ron's head and then immediately have another character say the say thing in later chapters.
4/29 c5 Rononono
i hate how slytherin fanfics nearly always make 11 year olds act like the jaded veterans of slytherin house just because they expected to be put there.
i hate how slytherin fanfics nearly always make 11 year olds act like the jaded veterans of slytherin house just because they expected to be put there.
4/26 c169 TimC
Fantastic chapter, excellent fiction, really well thought out with multiple plots twisting around! What follows is criticism of characters, not writing, like hating Hannibal Lecter while noting the skilled acting.
I never hated A Bones more than I do now, and her cronies in the Crooked Cop Club either. Pretending they all did a good job? The #1 reason anyone was there was RW. They did LESS THAN ZERO to protect him, hndering him from stopping his attacker. Well hey, no civilians got hurt at Fords Theater, so, not bad, right? And Roberts at least spoke up and told Crouch he was putting a target on RW's forehead with the suit armor secret. But, the slimy bureaucrats only care about protecting their image. Did they learn well from Fudge or what! Of course Bones plays nice with Percy because she sees him as a possible link to get to Weasley. Crouch worrying about statues to Weasley, well why not? How many werewolves did you rescue? I know you protected one death eater, right Barty?
Again, I realize this is fiction, it's just written so well I get worked up! Let's see #170 asap
Fantastic chapter, excellent fiction, really well thought out with multiple plots twisting around! What follows is criticism of characters, not writing, like hating Hannibal Lecter while noting the skilled acting.
I never hated A Bones more than I do now, and her cronies in the Crooked Cop Club either. Pretending they all did a good job? The #1 reason anyone was there was RW. They did LESS THAN ZERO to protect him, hndering him from stopping his attacker. Well hey, no civilians got hurt at Fords Theater, so, not bad, right? And Roberts at least spoke up and told Crouch he was putting a target on RW's forehead with the suit armor secret. But, the slimy bureaucrats only care about protecting their image. Did they learn well from Fudge or what! Of course Bones plays nice with Percy because she sees him as a possible link to get to Weasley. Crouch worrying about statues to Weasley, well why not? How many werewolves did you rescue? I know you protected one death eater, right Barty?
Again, I realize this is fiction, it's just written so well I get worked up! Let's see #170 asap