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8/31 c76 3oceanicsunrise20
I don't know if I should be scared or excited at the end of that chapter, great work!
8/30 c145 javi30
Very good chapter keep writing blessings to you and your loved ones
8/30 c145 Quick-demon
Awesome chapter. Once again proving that you write Dumbledore in such a unique and personable way that I haven't seen in a long time. Its the same with Snape. I really enjoyed the way he perceived this and how he wasn't easily fooled, and still being his prickly self.
Ron's family life was very much like him to his core. If he didn't have his previous experience with Fate, he may have indulged in the fantasy a lot longer.

Overall I really enjoyed how each character is portrayed and how they struggle against their own demons.

Kind of glad a Ron has tasted contentment and craves more. He is willing to work towards that, rather than trying to die. Although i think it will take a huge shift in his thinking to stop him going down the suicide route when he finishes his cycle. There is a lot that can happen between now and then.

I wonder what Dream is up to and if he is guiding Ron to somehow free himself. Or maybe he's just there to witness the wild ride. Its pretty interesting.

Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!
8/30 c74 oceanicsunrise20
Honestly feel stupid that I didn't notice that reveal at the end, it feels so obvious now! amazing chapter, can't wait to read more!
8/30 c145 Guest
I finally figured out how Ron is gonna die...
After saving the mountain from the curse,Ron will go to a fckin mall in America and...you know what happens to people in America when they go to mall,right?
Yes you guessed it right ...Our Champion of Fate is gonna get shot by a fckin psychotic will end with Ron becoming a victim of Mass Shooting in America
8/29 c145 PK930-theories 3
I have come to understand that dumbledore confessing ariana's death to Ron in 108 and now meeting and hugging her and seeing her shadow is all to make him resisting the ring and the stone allure believable, and thus prevent his death by the curse on the ring, Snape is already stronger mentally than the old man and so he won't even face this problem, this is my theory and I honestly won't think it realistic if he is killed by the ring after all of this, that's all, a good day to you my friend !
8/29 c145 Mari
WOW!Your creativity has no it!
8/29 c145 MrKebabi
Next up: Ginger Guy takes on Horny Serpents
8/28 c145 tanya
commenting again, but i love how ron's greatest dream is to be a family-oriented man. he doesn't care about riches or even some greater goal like becoming the minister for magic. he wants a simple life, just like how he did in canon.
8/27 c145 58Starway Man
Hmm, this chapter certainly started out different from most of the others! I mean, Ron trapped in a perfect fantasy with Daphne as his future wife, and the father of two children - Albus trapped in the original Dumbledore home in the village of Mould-on-the-Wold, back in the 19th century - Snape trapped in an alternate reality of March 1994, where Lily Potter was still alive and he'd never screwed up...'twas truly a black mercy the Sages inflicted on them all, within that mountain. Later, I liked how Dumbledore reacted to those three boys that hurt his sister, and how Severus reacted to the fake version of James Potter treating him with respect...proof indeed that it was all just a pleasant if disturbing fantasy, if there ever was one!

It was mildly surprising to me how Albus was the first one to escape the perfect fantasy life, I was actually expecting Snape to do that for some reason. But whatever - I enjoyed how Dumbledore went about rescuing the others from those cocoons, that was good use of magic and legilimency. And then Snape's monologue to the fake version of his mother - whew, the anger and self-loathing there were written brilliantly there! Ron's farewell to his fake daughter after speaking to Dream was almost as good, but not quite. And then, the Champion freeing himself, blasting that statue and angrily facing the cowering Sages...that was well-paced, good and emotional writing. And yes, you do have a knack for cliffhangers, but I'm certainly not complaining! I look forward to the next chapter soon, as always.
8/27 c145 Foster-the-Wizards
The most esoteric dream sequence ever in fanfiction! I mean my god, just absolutely masterful!
8/27 c145 7Phlebiac
Maaan you almost make me tear up with Dumbledores perfect world, such regrets the most powerful man have in his heart, he only wished to be a good older brother and keep his family same of some dumb kids.

Snape is really admirable in his resolution, is still a petty asshole but he knows and he wouldnt never take an easy path again. And the guy is gonna have some new horned serpent boots in the future hahaha

Artyom is trully interesting, how he accept escape from his paradise that easily when he knew the "client" was in trouble.

And finally my boy Ron got some humanity and hope back! with a huge portion of hate and murder, is going to be so great reading how Ron is gonna talk down the sages and then punch them in the face. And Jesus man, all the build up you made with how Ron most likely needed to sacrifice his fingers in this arc... only to just blow up the door! you really are a little shit my man hahahaha
8/27 c145 11NewAgeHero
Wow, what a great chapter! The Horned Serpents are bastards, but there has to be more to it than just enslaving people. I need to see what they think of Riddle, and how do Jeremiah and the American President fit all into this? Jeremiah is missing his fingers too, so this has to run all throughout the American government. I loved Snape in this chapter too, he really showed why he is still formidable. Awesome job as always!
8/27 c145 eagoralol
Wowwww yess ron is ron yet
Mann if i have money i would pay to make this fanfic a fuckin movie this is the best history by far
8/27 c145 tanya
this is a beautiful but tragic chapter. after countless chapters spent lost and miserable, the trio now understands better than ever what they're fighting for. i'm curious about dream's role in all this, and what exactly it'll do to assist ron… to me, dream represents us readers, or even the writer himself. dream loves these “characters,” wants them to be happy, but enjoys their suffering just as much. maybe it wants ron to suffer if only to see him rise back up stronger than before, just like we do.
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