for Brotherly Love2/17/2022 c8 lindergail
Hey there! Couple of comments here:
1) Great story! Nicely plotted
2) loved the lines about the President knowing how to recognize John and commenting on his modesty for not telling
3) Kinda wanted Snidely to suffer more
4) Nice turn-around for Dave, good character writing on the team members. Except I don't think Teyla and John would ever be that obvious with PDofA.
5) Nice to read stories that contain correct spelling and grammar. For me, it breaks my reading - ok, former English teacher here!
Thanks for sharing your talents!
Best,
Vicki
Hey there! Couple of comments here:
1) Great story! Nicely plotted
2) loved the lines about the President knowing how to recognize John and commenting on his modesty for not telling
3) Kinda wanted Snidely to suffer more
4) Nice turn-around for Dave, good character writing on the team members. Except I don't think Teyla and John would ever be that obvious with PDofA.
5) Nice to read stories that contain correct spelling and grammar. For me, it breaks my reading - ok, former English teacher here!
Thanks for sharing your talents!
Best,
Vicki
4/24/2021 c1 
2Var Devonshire
I just found this story and am loving it already. Always enjoy seeing how John and Dave's relationship grew after 'Outcast'.
2Var DevonshireI just found this story and am loving it already. Always enjoy seeing how John and Dave's relationship grew after 'Outcast'.
8/11/2020 c8 Guest
I'm so very sorry about your horrific childhood
I'm so very sorry about your horrific childhood
5/19/2020 c8 55Flatkatsi
A very well written and entertaining story. All the characters, both major and minor, felt real and the plot was excellent. I really enjoyed reading your fic.
55FlatkatsiA very well written and entertaining story. All the characters, both major and minor, felt real and the plot was excellent. I really enjoyed reading your fic.
7/31/2019 c8 Guest
Great story! Thank you for keeping these characters"alive". You did a good job with keeping the characters true. Wish Telya and John had really been a couple on the show
Great story! Thank you for keeping these characters"alive". You did a good job with keeping the characters true. Wish Telya and John had really been a couple on the show
6/30/2019 c8 Marlab
This made me realize how much I miss SGA. Wonderful job of writing ALL the characters and I love how you added Dave to the mix. Now I want to go rewatch the series!
This made me realize how much I miss SGA. Wonderful job of writing ALL the characters and I love how you added Dave to the mix. Now I want to go rewatch the series!
3/19/2019 c8 14Astraldust
Enjoyed this story immensely. I liked the fact Dave was so much more caring, so between him and the team John was safely rescued. Great work and hope you write another story soon.
14AstraldustEnjoyed this story immensely. I liked the fact Dave was so much more caring, so between him and the team John was safely rescued. Great work and hope you write another story soon.
3/16/2019 c8 fan 1
Loved it. Hope there is a sequel
Loved it. Hope there is a sequel
3/13/2019 c8 22hifield
Great story ... hope Dave gets to go visit them in the Pegasus. Really enjoyed every chapter and loved your writing style. Looking forward to more stories.
22hifieldGreat story ... hope Dave gets to go visit them in the Pegasus. Really enjoyed every chapter and loved your writing style. Looking forward to more stories.
3/13/2019 c8 26sheppardlover928
Great chapter! Loved Dave’s bravery and his cheekiness in dropping names andall the top-secret info to see John shocked that he knew so much! Especially loved John killing Snidely with his bare feet—-Go John!
26sheppardlover928Great chapter! Loved Dave’s bravery and his cheekiness in dropping names andall the top-secret info to see John shocked that he knew so much! Especially loved John killing Snidely with his bare feet—-Go John!
3/13/2019 c8 haike.m
Hello nherbie,
I loved reading your story and I'm a little bit sad that it ended now. Thank you for writing it and I hope there are more sga-stories coming from you in the future.
Love, Haike
Hello nherbie,
I loved reading your story and I'm a little bit sad that it ended now. Thank you for writing it and I hope there are more sga-stories coming from you in the future.
Love, Haike