for The Oncoming Storm9/7/2023 c28 Guest
im so glad that raven is here! i love her so much!
im so glad that raven is here! i love her so much!
9/7/2023 c23 L
She was talking to Percy about killing villains like he's been killing most of his opponents and doesn't know the situation is nuanced. Didn't like that she said he isn't progressing because he hasn't opened up to team in her timeframe. Then told him to ignore his comfort and instinct with opening up and the fact that the others have kept information from him as well because that shouldn't matter because of his age,right after telling hin that league members betrayed both of their trust.
Don't understand why she didnt tell him who betrayed him so he can be more cautious around them and decide if he wants to forgive them.
Their spar also felt like she was taking her frustrations out on him while also preparing him to deal with people like batman
She was talking to Percy about killing villains like he's been killing most of his opponents and doesn't know the situation is nuanced. Didn't like that she said he isn't progressing because he hasn't opened up to team in her timeframe. Then told him to ignore his comfort and instinct with opening up and the fact that the others have kept information from him as well because that shouldn't matter because of his age,right after telling hin that league members betrayed both of their trust.
Don't understand why she didnt tell him who betrayed him so he can be more cautious around them and decide if he wants to forgive them.
Their spar also felt like she was taking her frustrations out on him while also preparing him to deal with people like batman
9/7/2023 c28 Guest
Well, that ending happened
Well, that ending happened
9/7/2023 c28 Guest
interesting meeting with dreamer
interesting meeting with dreamer
9/7/2023 c28 Guest
I love how characters can actually die in your story. No good guys winning all the time.
I had an idea for a possible attack for Percy. He could change the properties of water to be super slippery like oil to win melee fights even quicker. Make it cold too but not letting it freeze to tire out enemies quicker too. Have them breath in cold humid air too.
I love how characters can actually die in your story. No good guys winning all the time.
I had an idea for a possible attack for Percy. He could change the properties of water to be super slippery like oil to win melee fights even quicker. Make it cold too but not letting it freeze to tire out enemies quicker too. Have them breath in cold humid air too.
9/9/2023 c28 EvilKidz
...while I don't like how easily you killed off Zatara, I like the fact that anyone isn't susceptible to dying, no matter who they are. I feel like early young justice was too scared to fully acknowledge the risk of the missions the team was going on, so seeing a story where everyone has a chance to bite the bullet is kinda refreshing.
...while I don't like how easily you killed off Zatara, I like the fact that anyone isn't susceptible to dying, no matter who they are. I feel like early young justice was too scared to fully acknowledge the risk of the missions the team was going on, so seeing a story where everyone has a chance to bite the bullet is kinda refreshing.
9/9/2023 c28 
1Ragnas Bredvolts
... did you just offed Zatara like that...I'm not sure what to feel about that
1Ragnas Bredvolts... did you just offed Zatara like that...I'm not sure what to feel about that
9/8/2023 c28 1Baahubali
Nice fight man, glad that you don’t have Percy completely dominate the battle but that the pendulum of advantage constantly changes.
Never thought I’d say this but good presentation of strip clubs and I can’t wait for the rest of this arc.
Also, there’s no way you just killed off zatara! Probably some illusion right?
1BaahubaliNice fight man, glad that you don’t have Percy completely dominate the battle but that the pendulum of advantage constantly changes.
Never thought I’d say this but good presentation of strip clubs and I can’t wait for the rest of this arc.
Also, there’s no way you just killed off zatara! Probably some illusion right?
9/8/2023 c28 carlos manuel reyes
para cuando percy entrara en la liga de la justicia oficialmente aun no pasan los 6 meses ?
para cuando percy entrara en la liga de la justicia oficialmente aun no pasan los 6 meses ?
9/8/2023 c26 maxe03
Nah Percy wrong aqualad wasn't under his leadership and it's not his responsibility. Kaldor chose to go off on a dangerous mission and not inform them. He's also wrong about him being a bad leader he wasn't a bad leader before now he just treated them as colleagues and not friends because that's all he saw them as and there's nothing wrong with that.
Cant wait to see Percy and the team reaction when canary tells him what she and batman did. He should inform the team what they did and let them make there own decisions about having her around,cause honestly I don't see why Percy would want her around or trust her or batman now given their betrayal and how highly he prizes loyalty. I can't see myself wanting people around me who dug into my pasty, took my blood,and told my business to people and who is also plotting ways to take me out
Nah Percy wrong aqualad wasn't under his leadership and it's not his responsibility. Kaldor chose to go off on a dangerous mission and not inform them. He's also wrong about him being a bad leader he wasn't a bad leader before now he just treated them as colleagues and not friends because that's all he saw them as and there's nothing wrong with that.
Cant wait to see Percy and the team reaction when canary tells him what she and batman did. He should inform the team what they did and let them make there own decisions about having her around,cause honestly I don't see why Percy would want her around or trust her or batman now given their betrayal and how highly he prizes loyalty. I can't see myself wanting people around me who dug into my pasty, took my blood,and told my business to people and who is also plotting ways to take me out
9/8/2023 c28 Fungod
Damn. First we don't get an update in months. Then the update we get leaves us on a cliff hanger. You've gotta stop playing with our emotions. Still, a good chapter and I look forward to more.
Damn. First we don't get an update in months. Then the update we get leaves us on a cliff hanger. You've gotta stop playing with our emotions. Still, a good chapter and I look forward to more.
9/8/2023 c28 WalkerFRD
Fico feliz com o retorno das atualizações, embora esse capítulo serviu pra lembrar que esse Percy, apesar de passar anos no Tártaros, é muito fraco, no que diz respeito a hidrocnese, sua forma de manipular a água é muito simplória e amadora.
Fico feliz com o retorno das atualizações, embora esse capítulo serviu pra lembrar que esse Percy, apesar de passar anos no Tártaros, é muito fraco, no que diz respeito a hidrocnese, sua forma de manipular a água é muito simplória e amadora.
9/8/2023 c28 3Stella Imber
Oh thank God i thought this story was dead in so glad you're back. Also i see you've taken a page of of G.R.R.M book and have no problem wigh killing off characters
3Stella ImberOh thank God i thought this story was dead in so glad you're back. Also i see you've taken a page of of G.R.R.M book and have no problem wigh killing off characters