for The Sleepover8/18/2019 c1 
20jettmanas
Hey, good to meet you here. Didn't find a link on DA, but did a search here. Decided to start with a short, complete one. Are most of the others complete but not marked?
I loved the slice-of-life story. You captured the innocence of the kids well, including Tara. And the parents were very believable. I grew up in the VCR period- nostalgia. Even the title of the movie was fun. Clever look at how Bonnie's life changed. And with such parents!
Well done. Also, I might have a story you'd enjoy as well! :)
20jettmanasHey, good to meet you here. Didn't find a link on DA, but did a search here. Decided to start with a short, complete one. Are most of the others complete but not marked?
I loved the slice-of-life story. You captured the innocence of the kids well, including Tara. And the parents were very believable. I grew up in the VCR period- nostalgia. Even the title of the movie was fun. Clever look at how Bonnie's life changed. And with such parents!
Well done. Also, I might have a story you'd enjoy as well! :)