for The Men From Onyx10/19/2022 c89 Anonymous
While I am sad that TMFO isn’t going to be finished, I do appreciate that you at least let us all see what the plan was going to be, so we can at least imagine the scenes and how they would’ve played. Thankyou for an entertaining story and conclusion, and best of luck in life
While I am sad that TMFO isn’t going to be finished, I do appreciate that you at least let us all see what the plan was going to be, so we can at least imagine the scenes and how they would’ve played. Thankyou for an entertaining story and conclusion, and best of luck in life
10/18/2022 c89 naotw
Great plot. Wonderful closure, this is a summary on its own. Thank you for the story.
Great plot. Wonderful closure, this is a summary on its own. Thank you for the story.
10/18/2022 c89 
15BlackRaptor1
This a very nice summary on how this story ends. It is very sad and disappointing that this story won't be 100% finished.
But in saying that, I am happy that you did not leave us on a cliffhanger, and happy to see what happens to everyone and everything. I am glad that summary did and still does provide that happy ending.
Thank you very much for the opportunity of reading this great story, you have brought me happiness and enjoyment of reading this great story that I will never forget.
15BlackRaptor1This a very nice summary on how this story ends. It is very sad and disappointing that this story won't be 100% finished.
But in saying that, I am happy that you did not leave us on a cliffhanger, and happy to see what happens to everyone and everything. I am glad that summary did and still does provide that happy ending.
Thank you very much for the opportunity of reading this great story, you have brought me happiness and enjoyment of reading this great story that I will never forget.
10/18/2022 c89 ArchmageXemnos
Well, its been one heck of a ride. It's sad that you are unable to finish the story, but I want to give you a huge thanks for giving us closure with your draft notes. There's nothing worse than when a good story ends prematurely and you are left hanging. Good luck to you in all your future endeavors, God Bless.
Well, its been one heck of a ride. It's sad that you are unable to finish the story, but I want to give you a huge thanks for giving us closure with your draft notes. There's nothing worse than when a good story ends prematurely and you are left hanging. Good luck to you in all your future endeavors, God Bless.
10/18/2022 c89 DomR1997
I'm sorry you have to end it here, but I'm glad you told us how it would end. This has been one of my favorite stories, I've followed it since the original, and you've really improved so much since those early days. Good job. I hope you never stop writing because you're really very good at it. The world needs good stories.
I'm sorry you have to end it here, but I'm glad you told us how it would end. This has been one of my favorite stories, I've followed it since the original, and you've really improved so much since those early days. Good job. I hope you never stop writing because you're really very good at it. The world needs good stories.
10/18/2022 c1 PaladinSans
One more thing, are others welcome to attempt to finish or rewrite the story? You might wanna answer that in the story itself, rather than a PM
One more thing, are others welcome to attempt to finish or rewrite the story? You might wanna answer that in the story itself, rather than a PM
10/18/2022 c89 Brother Bov
I am saddened that you have decided not to complete this story but thankful for you for your hardwork up until now and for laying the story to rest somewhat better with the plot. Hehe, its got a shallow grave instead of just being left to rot, eh.
Its been a hell of a ride, i hope you continue to write stories. And if possible, one day, you may once more feel like picking this up again, and well...
I loyally await, always
Brother Bov.
I am saddened that you have decided not to complete this story but thankful for you for your hardwork up until now and for laying the story to rest somewhat better with the plot. Hehe, its got a shallow grave instead of just being left to rot, eh.
Its been a hell of a ride, i hope you continue to write stories. And if possible, one day, you may once more feel like picking this up again, and well...
I loyally await, always
Brother Bov.
10/18/2022 c89 XQuality
It has been a great pleasure reading this, i wish you the best of luck in your future endevaours and stay safe
It has been a great pleasure reading this, i wish you the best of luck in your future endevaours and stay safe
10/18/2022 c89 BerixTheThief
Really sad to see this story go...
in some way it has been part of my stability in my chaotic and shitty life. i thank you for writing this amazing story and i'm glad that it got a proper ending.
-BerixTheThief (Djurran)
Really sad to see this story go...
in some way it has been part of my stability in my chaotic and shitty life. i thank you for writing this amazing story and i'm glad that it got a proper ending.
-BerixTheThief (Djurran)
10/17/2022 c89 Arakile
Thank you for the closure for the story it's shame it had to end without completely finish it, but thank you for an amazing as story and goodluck in the future.
Thank you for the closure for the story it's shame it had to end without completely finish it, but thank you for an amazing as story and goodluck in the future.
10/17/2022 c89 LiquidusSnake
Well it sucks, but at least we know how it would have ended, thank you, it has been an honor.
Well it sucks, but at least we know how it would have ended, thank you, it has been an honor.
10/17/2022 c89 5PoofyOhio
As some one who has been a fan since chapter six of the original was the newest chapter, I must admit that I’m… sad to see it end; especially this way.
It been a good ride, years in the making, and I will always look fondly upon this story.
Godspeed author man. It’s been a pleasure to read your story.
5PoofyOhioAs some one who has been a fan since chapter six of the original was the newest chapter, I must admit that I’m… sad to see it end; especially this way.
It been a good ride, years in the making, and I will always look fondly upon this story.
Godspeed author man. It’s been a pleasure to read your story.
10/17/2022 c89 1SpoopyTheScout
It was a wild, fun ride while it lasted. But god damn does this melancholy feeling suck.
This will go down in my personal Hall Of Fame for Fanfics.
1SpoopyTheScoutIt was a wild, fun ride while it lasted. But god damn does this melancholy feeling suck.
This will go down in my personal Hall Of Fame for Fanfics.