
7/18/2023 c28 musa22lbl
Wow what a great story, i was a little sad that it ended. Theres still to much that you left unfinished, i will keep an eye out for if you write another sequel for it which i really hope that you do.
Wow what a great story, i was a little sad that it ended. Theres still to much that you left unfinished, i will keep an eye out for if you write another sequel for it which i really hope that you do.
2/20/2023 c28 bechilldarling
I just came across this and I really HOPE that one day you’ll make a part 2!
I just came across this and I really HOPE that one day you’ll make a part 2!
1/27/2021 c28
9CarpeDiemMay
Honestly, I don’t usually read any HP stories with such a front runner OC but I loved this! When the relationship between Riga and Rabastan and Riga and Sirius began I was thinking that maybe there would be a rivalry between the two men to win Riga’s affection and I like to think that it could still be possible.
I also love how you finished it off. She believed she had lost her magic for quite a while before she found out that she never did, it had simply changed in how it feels to her.
In addition you absolutely wrote her perfectly. While she’s knowledgeable and powerful, she’s not a Mary Sue. She still has flaws and issues that she has to overcome.
That you so very much for not only taking me on a whirlwind journey with your story, but also writing the summary well enough to intrigue me into reading a HP fic with such a prominent OC.
However there were a few issues with your writing. I think you may need to go back over and edit In quite a few places. I did notice many sentences where some words were placed in odd spots and therefore made it a little difficult to understand as well as you using “me” instead of “my” and vice versa. In addition, I am unsure what the definition of “reckon” you were using as each time you used the word or a variant of it, it was confusing and seemed out of place as the word didn’t describe what you were trying to.
If you don’t want to edit it, I can understand that completely but I just thought I’d put it out there just in case.
Again, you’ve done an amazing job and I will still be adding this story to my favourites list so I can come back in the future for another read. Thank you

Honestly, I don’t usually read any HP stories with such a front runner OC but I loved this! When the relationship between Riga and Rabastan and Riga and Sirius began I was thinking that maybe there would be a rivalry between the two men to win Riga’s affection and I like to think that it could still be possible.
I also love how you finished it off. She believed she had lost her magic for quite a while before she found out that she never did, it had simply changed in how it feels to her.
In addition you absolutely wrote her perfectly. While she’s knowledgeable and powerful, she’s not a Mary Sue. She still has flaws and issues that she has to overcome.
That you so very much for not only taking me on a whirlwind journey with your story, but also writing the summary well enough to intrigue me into reading a HP fic with such a prominent OC.
However there were a few issues with your writing. I think you may need to go back over and edit In quite a few places. I did notice many sentences where some words were placed in odd spots and therefore made it a little difficult to understand as well as you using “me” instead of “my” and vice versa. In addition, I am unsure what the definition of “reckon” you were using as each time you used the word or a variant of it, it was confusing and seemed out of place as the word didn’t describe what you were trying to.
If you don’t want to edit it, I can understand that completely but I just thought I’d put it out there just in case.
Again, you’ve done an amazing job and I will still be adding this story to my favourites list so I can come back in the future for another read. Thank you
8/22/2020 c28 bekahh33
This story is incredible! I honestly don’t know how it doesn’t have more attention on it. Your writing is impeccable. I love Riga and her relationships with those around her. There is so much more I want to see from her story, if you ever felt inclined to write a sequel I would absolutely be your biggest supporter.
This story is incredible! I honestly don’t know how it doesn’t have more attention on it. Your writing is impeccable. I love Riga and her relationships with those around her. There is so much more I want to see from her story, if you ever felt inclined to write a sequel I would absolutely be your biggest supporter.
8/1/2020 c1 Matt
Prophesied is a word. Prophesised is not a word. Doesn't exist. Not in any dictionary. Get rid of the extra S.
Prophesied is a word. Prophesised is not a word. Doesn't exist. Not in any dictionary. Get rid of the extra S.
5/30/2020 c28 MarvelDweeb
dang I really really liked this story, but I feel bad cos I feel like rabastan lestrange never really got an end? I don't know it just feels incomplete. or maybe it's just that I wanna see them together idk HAHA
dang I really really liked this story, but I feel bad cos I feel like rabastan lestrange never really got an end? I don't know it just feels incomplete. or maybe it's just that I wanna see them together idk HAHA
5/30/2020 c25 MarvelDweeb
feck idk I know hes like 15 years her senior but they're reactions to each other are rlly funny and for some reason his reaction to her is AHDHHS IDK YALL
feck idk I know hes like 15 years her senior but they're reactions to each other are rlly funny and for some reason his reaction to her is AHDHHS IDK YALL
12/18/2019 c28 Noelle
Does she end up in a relationship with Sirius?
Does she end up in a relationship with Sirius?
12/17/2019 c28 Cass
Whoever she ends up, I'll be happy for her!
Whoever she ends up, I'll be happy for her!
12/12/2019 c27 Sam
Am I the only one that wants Riga with Rabastan? At first I wanted her with Sirius, but I changed my mind.
Am I the only one that wants Riga with Rabastan? At first I wanted her with Sirius, but I changed my mind.
12/11/2019 c27 Mia
This story is honestly one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I've ever read. Congratulations!
This story is honestly one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I've ever read. Congratulations!
11/11/2019 c27
5Chaint1
Ok so I started your story a few days ago and I am addicted! I really really like what you did here, the plot, the characters etc... That was really cool, and you write incredibly well! I am simply amazed at the work you did, the story is so well put and again I love the writing and the choices of your words! I'm really sad that the story is almost done, I really enjoyed reading it :(
Anyway good job here!
Ps : Is it wrong of me to have liked the idea of a Riga-Rabastan for a few chapters ahah?

Ok so I started your story a few days ago and I am addicted! I really really like what you did here, the plot, the characters etc... That was really cool, and you write incredibly well! I am simply amazed at the work you did, the story is so well put and again I love the writing and the choices of your words! I'm really sad that the story is almost done, I really enjoyed reading it :(
Anyway good job here!
Ps : Is it wrong of me to have liked the idea of a Riga-Rabastan for a few chapters ahah?
10/12/2019 c26 Guest
wow ! goosebumps! i just binged this story and it’s so amazing ! i love riga and how you wove her story into the world. looking forward to the next chapter !
wow ! goosebumps! i just binged this story and it’s so amazing ! i love riga and how you wove her story into the world. looking forward to the next chapter !