for Cars and Secrets1/20/2019 c1 
45heyits.reagan
thank you soooo much for this! i loved it :D can i give some constructive criticism here though? try not to use so many '…' because it kind of drags things on, much like a comma subconsciously makes the reader pause. i hope that made sense haha. but thank you again for the story! :)
45heyits.reaganthank you soooo much for this! i loved it :D can i give some constructive criticism here though? try not to use so many '…' because it kind of drags things on, much like a comma subconsciously makes the reader pause. i hope that made sense haha. but thank you again for the story! :)