for Morning Star10/28/2020 c18 Danny Williams
Very good story.
Like it when good and evil work together for the greater good,
Really liked where Kakashi meets his father again ( and has to man up).
Think Naruto should have Nara and Ino along with Hinata in his harem.
Very good story.
Like it when good and evil work together for the greater good,
Really liked where Kakashi meets his father again ( and has to man up).
Think Naruto should have Nara and Ino along with Hinata in his harem.
10/12/2020 c18 
13Zoran Dawn-Eclipse
Looks good to me. And there's no harm in adding characters, so long as you've got a backstory to support their appearance.
Which you already have, so you're good to go.
13Zoran Dawn-EclipseLooks good to me. And there's no harm in adding characters, so long as you've got a backstory to support their appearance.
Which you already have, so you're good to go.