2/4/2019 c2 1JamesTKent
Well, Colonel Ramsay is someone I definitely approve of. I will be interested in seeing how the Lily/James/James Jr vs. Harry pans out, and where the bloody hell have they all BEEN? Dumbles KNEW? Once all the information has been wrung out of him, I think a long and lingering death is in order. I suspect he'd been keeping things from Sirius & Remus as well, not to mention the rest of the family.
While I'm REALLY liking the other tale, this one is VERY promising.
Well, Colonel Ramsay is someone I definitely approve of. I will be interested in seeing how the Lily/James/James Jr vs. Harry pans out, and where the bloody hell have they all BEEN? Dumbles KNEW? Once all the information has been wrung out of him, I think a long and lingering death is in order. I suspect he'd been keeping things from Sirius & Remus as well, not to mention the rest of the family.
While I'm REALLY liking the other tale, this one is VERY promising.
2/4/2019 c2 mckertis
"dont expect frequent updates" ?
Hey, i know from experience, that anything even loosely connected to DZ2 never gets remotely close to being completed, or even go past 5 short chapters. So yeah, that's a given. "Frequent updates", honestly...
"dont expect frequent updates" ?
Hey, i know from experience, that anything even loosely connected to DZ2 never gets remotely close to being completed, or even go past 5 short chapters. So yeah, that's a given. "Frequent updates", honestly...
2/4/2019 c2 1Dragon-bait-2001
this could be an amazing story. i look forward to it...but but but Keystone!
this could be an amazing story. i look forward to it...but but but Keystone!
2/4/2019 c2 gginsc
I wonder if young James is the older twin. The fact that Harry has the lordship ring will make his so-called family's rebirth interesting. I hope their is no way for them to take it from him. I really hate what they have done and wish them all the ill in the world.
I wonder if young James is the older twin. The fact that Harry has the lordship ring will make his so-called family's rebirth interesting. I hope their is no way for them to take it from him. I really hate what they have done and wish them all the ill in the world.
1/30/2019 c1 MajorChaos13
Super happy that you will carry on with the story, fun thing is that even if James Jr comes to try and take Harry's place he won't find it easy cause he was not the one that has saved the school and Sirius. Looking forward to the updates.
Super happy that you will carry on with the story, fun thing is that even if James Jr comes to try and take Harry's place he won't find it easy cause he was not the one that has saved the school and Sirius. Looking forward to the updates.
1/24/2019 c1 2Pikol
Jesus fuck I want more, this is excellent, i always liked Warrior!Harry, not necessarily a super powerful, but a person who can hear the drums of war and dance to their tune, and you gave exactly that
Jesus fuck I want more, this is excellent, i always liked Warrior!Harry, not necessarily a super powerful, but a person who can hear the drums of war and dance to their tune, and you gave exactly that
1/21/2019 c1 Guest
Problem with your idea of letting someone else continue this story is that not many authors are capable of pulling off a military Harry.
Outside of what you displayed here, the only two I can think of are "elmarquis" and "dobbyelflord".
I think it was either "racke" or "Rorschach blot" who had a Harry in the foreign Legion, but neither are doing full stories anymore.
Nor is "Dobbyelflord" AFAIK.
And "Elmarquis" is too busy with RL to even continue his own stories, let alone someone else's.
In other words, this little gem will be left ignored and to rot, if you don't continue it yourself..
And that would be a severe waste imnsho.
Problem with your idea of letting someone else continue this story is that not many authors are capable of pulling off a military Harry.
Outside of what you displayed here, the only two I can think of are "elmarquis" and "dobbyelflord".
I think it was either "racke" or "Rorschach blot" who had a Harry in the foreign Legion, but neither are doing full stories anymore.
Nor is "Dobbyelflord" AFAIK.
And "Elmarquis" is too busy with RL to even continue his own stories, let alone someone else's.
In other words, this little gem will be left ignored and to rot, if you don't continue it yourself..
And that would be a severe waste imnsho.
1/21/2019 c1 1Dragon-bait-2001
Wow... That is... amazing.
Love Keystone, and that HAS to finish. But damn, this has to keep going too. I'm now invested in this.
Wow... That is... amazing.
Love Keystone, and that HAS to finish. But damn, this has to keep going too. I'm now invested in this.
1/19/2019 c1 Olivium
By God, this was amazing. Shame you don't want to write it, but good job on this.
By God, this was amazing. Shame you don't want to write it, but good job on this.
1/19/2019 c1 Wounded Lily
I know you don't plan on continuing this but if you did that would be awesome this was very well written and exciting
I know you don't plan on continuing this but if you did that would be awesome this was very well written and exciting