for Secret Past Revamped10/25/2020 c3 
1theintrovertedleader
I love this great chapter like always and I just love that the story doesn't feel too rushed.
1theintrovertedleaderI love this great chapter like always and I just love that the story doesn't feel too rushed.
10/21/2020 c3 4thejournalisticartist
As always, great chapter. I'll admit, the part in the stairwell was hard to read. People like Thomas are the scum of the earth. Thank you again for having the courage to write this story. Good luck writing the next chapter.
4thejournalisticartistAs always, great chapter. I'll admit, the part in the stairwell was hard to read. People like Thomas are the scum of the earth. Thank you again for having the courage to write this story. Good luck writing the next chapter.
5/20/2020 c2 thejournalisticartist
I can't wait to see what direction you're going to take this in, especially since you said you were going to change some details from the original story. The improvement in your writing skills never ceases to amaze me. It almost makes me wonder if you've read the books, and that they had somewhat of an influence on your style. (If you haven't read them, I highly recommend them. They're amazing.) I know you said updates won't be super frequent, but I'm excited to see what the next chapter holds.
I can't wait to see what direction you're going to take this in, especially since you said you were going to change some details from the original story. The improvement in your writing skills never ceases to amaze me. It almost makes me wonder if you've read the books, and that they had somewhat of an influence on your style. (If you haven't read them, I highly recommend them. They're amazing.) I know you said updates won't be super frequent, but I'm excited to see what the next chapter holds.
4/28/2020 c2 Guest
OMG THAT IS AN AMAZING END TO A CHAPTER! Please update more! Just the fact he found her quickly was interesting!
OMG THAT IS AN AMAZING END TO A CHAPTER! Please update more! Just the fact he found her quickly was interesting!
4/26/2020 c1 thejournalisticartist
I'm so happy to see that you are continuing this story. For some, it might just be a fanfic for an old Disney Channel movie, but I know that there are people out there who really need stories like these to help cope with a trauma similar to what Olivia went through. So thank you for not abandoning it. I also noticed that, while I already found them to be wonderful, your writing skills have improved tremendously! It makes me even more excited to read your future chapters. Good luck with your writing and I hope to read more from you soon. <3
I'm so happy to see that you are continuing this story. For some, it might just be a fanfic for an old Disney Channel movie, but I know that there are people out there who really need stories like these to help cope with a trauma similar to what Olivia went through. So thank you for not abandoning it. I also noticed that, while I already found them to be wonderful, your writing skills have improved tremendously! It makes me even more excited to read your future chapters. Good luck with your writing and I hope to read more from you soon. <3
2/20/2019 c1 1anonymousvoice
Oops! Lol - I just reviewed on the original and didn’t even see this when i typed my review. Looking forward to this rewrite! :)
1anonymousvoiceOops! Lol - I just reviewed on the original and didn’t even see this when i typed my review. Looking forward to this rewrite! :)