for A Spy In The House Of Love9/27/2019 c1 
6onwardintolight
What a beautiful whirlwind of a moment. It was so wonderful to get this snapshot into his thoughts. And those last two lines! End me
6onwardintolightWhat a beautiful whirlwind of a moment. It was so wonderful to get this snapshot into his thoughts. And those last two lines! End me
1/27/2019 c1 8Cicatrick
This is incredibly beautiful, delicate and shimmering and impressionistic. You have such a sure, idiosyncratic eye for both detail and the broader strokes of character, and they interact wonderfully here. Yet there are grounding and concrete elements too, perfect notes: Han's kneejerk need to remind Leia he is selfish, Chewie's patient waiting, Leia's double-edged question. Wonderful work and I can't wait to see more from you.
8CicatrickThis is incredibly beautiful, delicate and shimmering and impressionistic. You have such a sure, idiosyncratic eye for both detail and the broader strokes of character, and they interact wonderfully here. Yet there are grounding and concrete elements too, perfect notes: Han's kneejerk need to remind Leia he is selfish, Chewie's patient waiting, Leia's double-edged question. Wonderful work and I can't wait to see more from you.
1/23/2019 c1 Guest
Oh, my. This is just lovely!
Oh, my. This is just lovely!
1/22/2019 c1 3Scruffys Sweetheart
There are just so many dazzling little gems in this, I just don’t know where to begin or end...this is such a wonderful peek behind the curtain of Han Solo, letting us see that tender anxious heart that beats silently along to the melody of Leia. Succinct yet so rich, close to perfection, and on your first outing tooyou MUST keep writing!
3Scruffys SweetheartThere are just so many dazzling little gems in this, I just don’t know where to begin or end...this is such a wonderful peek behind the curtain of Han Solo, letting us see that tender anxious heart that beats silently along to the melody of Leia. Succinct yet so rich, close to perfection, and on your first outing tooyou MUST keep writing!
1/22/2019 c1 35justinegraham
This is wonderful! I especially love this line:
You are looking at her without noticing until you notice she's looking right back. Brown meets hazel, charged and so forever altered. And where you wondered before, it has now become perfectly clear.
*sigh*
Beautifully written and hooray for taking the plunge and sharing this with us. I hope to read many more!
35justinegrahamThis is wonderful! I especially love this line:
You are looking at her without noticing until you notice she's looking right back. Brown meets hazel, charged and so forever altered. And where you wondered before, it has now become perfectly clear.
*sigh*
Beautifully written and hooray for taking the plunge and sharing this with us. I hope to read many more!
1/22/2019 c1 45erindarroch
You did it! You wrote a thing! Yay!
This is so dreamy, almost impressionistic. Lovely. I like how you somehow capture what's going on between them on the surface, versus what's *really* going on between them underneath.
Favourite lines: **"What's in it for me, Princess?" You ask with barely a thought, for what if you strayed, what if you unravelled, what if she saw.**
Beautiful!
45erindarrochYou did it! You wrote a thing! Yay!
This is so dreamy, almost impressionistic. Lovely. I like how you somehow capture what's going on between them on the surface, versus what's *really* going on between them underneath.
Favourite lines: **"What's in it for me, Princess?" You ask with barely a thought, for what if you strayed, what if you unravelled, what if she saw.**
Beautiful!
1/22/2019 c2 11Jedi of Grace
YOU GO, GIRL! This is awesome! It’s poetic and true to character and beautiful.
“You think a princess and a guy like me? But you think so, too.” Love this admission.
“You want. This is what it comes down to.” Yes. I love seeing inside Han’s Head!
“...she responds because she is weak in her strong heart...” Such lovely words. Well done!
11Jedi of GraceYOU GO, GIRL! This is awesome! It’s poetic and true to character and beautiful.
“You think a princess and a guy like me? But you think so, too.” Love this admission.
“You want. This is what it comes down to.” Yes. I love seeing inside Han’s Head!
“...she responds because she is weak in her strong heart...” Such lovely words. Well done!