for The Castle of the Eastern Stars5/8/2021 c17 Guest
this is so good! I love how you've built up his paranoia and anger in a way that'll make his backstory even more gripping :)
this is so good! I love how you've built up his paranoia and anger in a way that'll make his backstory even more gripping :)
8/19/2020 c16 Guest
I love this story, it's so different to other ones I've read
I love this story, it's so different to other ones I've read
8/19/2020 c15 Guest
this is so good :D
this is so good :D
8/19/2020 c16 Guest
I love your writing style! This is so interesting and you have me hooked
I love your writing style! This is so interesting and you have me hooked
6/4/2020 c14 Guest
I can’t wait for the next chapter !
I can’t wait for the next chapter !
5/21/2020 c12 Guest
This chapter is so sad but I like it anyway.
This chapter is so sad but I like it anyway.
5/4/2020 c10 Guest
This chapter is so amusing !
This chapter is so amusing !
4/25/2020 c8 
2shirzadym
This is really interesting; I remember now why I had gotten an interest in this story.
2shirzadymThis is really interesting; I remember now why I had gotten an interest in this story.
4/15/2020 c5 shirzadym
I thought this was dead for sure;but I'm happy to be proven wrong.
The chapter itself was quite interesting; especially how it ends in her cutting off.
Looking forward to what you'll write next.
I thought this was dead for sure;but I'm happy to be proven wrong.
The chapter itself was quite interesting; especially how it ends in her cutting off.
Looking forward to what you'll write next.
1/29/2019 c3 Guest
If this is going to be an Astrid bashing fic could you please say so now as I really don't want to invest in a story that I ultimately will not enjoy.
If this is going to be an Astrid bashing fic could you please say so now as I really don't want to invest in a story that I ultimately will not enjoy.
1/29/2019 c3 4HTTYDlover99
Ooohhhhhh. This story is dark and I love it! I think I know why Hiccup turned dark. It's so obvious, how did I not see it before? Years of being mercilessly bullied by the other vikings made him like this. No. No not just the vikings. It was power. Power does horrible things to the most kind hearted people. What happens to Astrid? I kinda want to see Hiccup gain her trust the STAB her in the back when she least expects it.
4HTTYDlover99Ooohhhhhh. This story is dark and I love it! I think I know why Hiccup turned dark. It's so obvious, how did I not see it before? Years of being mercilessly bullied by the other vikings made him like this. No. No not just the vikings. It was power. Power does horrible things to the most kind hearted people. What happens to Astrid? I kinda want to see Hiccup gain her trust the STAB her in the back when she least expects it.
1/22/2019 c1 Guest
I think this could turn into a pretty good story.
I think this could turn into a pretty good story.