
1/16 c22 Mopsus Sees All
I love this book its so creative and interesting and well paced, in other books its adventure after avenure so I can't put them down, here I can moderate myself while still being completely obssessed.
I love this book its so creative and interesting and well paced, in other books its adventure after avenure so I can't put them down, here I can moderate myself while still being completely obssessed.
1/16 c4 Mopsus Sees All
OMG I love this book, and Bellatrix is the cherry on top
OMG I love this book, and Bellatrix is the cherry on top
11/12/2024 c27 kawasaki1298
You write a awful amount of info on the other characters but its hard to see where the main character stand you should fix this hermione is casting silently cool where does daphne stand? Or for that matter harry the one thats being targeted
You write a awful amount of info on the other characters but its hard to see where the main character stand you should fix this hermione is casting silently cool where does daphne stand? Or for that matter harry the one thats being targeted
11/3/2024 c71 Silver
Loved this please keep making more chapters
Loved this please keep making more chapters
8/10/2024 c71
55Taliesin The Eternal Bard
All I will say is I read this story years ago, you have improved on it

All I will say is I read this story years ago, you have improved on it
6/16/2024 c71 DanYHKim
A bit of calm. I am relieved, because the l previous chapter really took it out of me.
I'm kind of sad about Dumbledore. Maybe his heart attack also precipitated some mini-strokes, which would exacerbate his personality flaws and cause him to become less rational and more single-minded and vindictive. His ruling on Draco should get back to the parents, and the Board in particular, so they can force his 'medically necessary' retirement.
Meanwhile, Lucius *might* be in the castle, staying within the Lord's apartment with Draco. The tendency of the Map to be ambiguous about names is a perennial weakness. Narcissa got away from the family just in time. I feel that Lord Draco would not hesitate to punish her through family magic, with his headship.
The Prophet headline says that you have more plotted out. I really look forward to it.
A bit of calm. I am relieved, because the l previous chapter really took it out of me.
I'm kind of sad about Dumbledore. Maybe his heart attack also precipitated some mini-strokes, which would exacerbate his personality flaws and cause him to become less rational and more single-minded and vindictive. His ruling on Draco should get back to the parents, and the Board in particular, so they can force his 'medically necessary' retirement.
Meanwhile, Lucius *might* be in the castle, staying within the Lord's apartment with Draco. The tendency of the Map to be ambiguous about names is a perennial weakness. Narcissa got away from the family just in time. I feel that Lord Draco would not hesitate to punish her through family magic, with his headship.
The Prophet headline says that you have more plotted out. I really look forward to it.