for A New Beginning9/7 c2 ThatoneguyC
Why the hell would you change your character name from a Chinese name to a Japanese name knowing that China and Japan hate each other there’s no way a Chinese person would do that.
Why the hell would you change your character name from a Chinese name to a Japanese name knowing that China and Japan hate each other there’s no way a Chinese person would do that.
7/3 c23 ImHateful
Why was the MC so cringe this chapter? It made my skin crawl reading "Blue Storm" out loud, also what was up with the speech here as well? I didn't mind them before, infact I sorta liked them but what in the power of friendship and Cheery fuck was this, I hope he grows out of this chunni phase later.
Why was the MC so cringe this chapter? It made my skin crawl reading "Blue Storm" out loud, also what was up with the speech here as well? I didn't mind them before, infact I sorta liked them but what in the power of friendship and Cheery fuck was this, I hope he grows out of this chunni phase later.
7/2 c18 ImHateful
Her eyes pleaded for me, "Daisuke, am I not good enough for you?"
There was that look, the very same that I dreaded. Hesitating for a few more seconds, "... Yes."
Bruh don't be a dick head about it, just explain that you don't have feelings that's it.
I wanted to slap the fuck out of him when I read that, such idiotic behavior coming from him, I get that you don't have any feelings for them but have some tact at least with it.
Her eyes pleaded for me, "Daisuke, am I not good enough for you?"
There was that look, the very same that I dreaded. Hesitating for a few more seconds, "... Yes."
Bruh don't be a dick head about it, just explain that you don't have feelings that's it.
I wanted to slap the fuck out of him when I read that, such idiotic behavior coming from him, I get that you don't have any feelings for them but have some tact at least with it.
7/2 c2 ImHateful
I honestly don't understand the mental gymnastics that the mc is going through to lie about his name and race, only for him to end up giving out his real name immediately afterwards, like why lie about it to begin with? It's just stupid at this point, like just say you don't remember how you had gotten there and be done with it, it's giving me a headache just reading it trying to comprehend his thought process about that.
I honestly don't understand the mental gymnastics that the mc is going through to lie about his name and race, only for him to end up giving out his real name immediately afterwards, like why lie about it to begin with? It's just stupid at this point, like just say you don't remember how you had gotten there and be done with it, it's giving me a headache just reading it trying to comprehend his thought process about that.
4/15 c60 Solaris Deluxe
Look, either commit to the harem story or back out fully, don’t go for a wishy washy back and forth “I love Miho but I’m gonna have sex with the other women who love me even though I don’t love them because I only love Miho but I’m not gonna try to stop them from continuing to romance me even though I rejected them.” crap, it’s really starting to get annoying. I like the non romance dynamics of the story, but the MC refusing to be more decisive about whether or not he’s gonna go for the harem route is very frustrating. If you don’t love them, stop baiting them and shut them down fully. If you do love them, stop rejecting them and accept the harem. It shouldn’t take over half the story to get a proper resolution to this…
Look, either commit to the harem story or back out fully, don’t go for a wishy washy back and forth “I love Miho but I’m gonna have sex with the other women who love me even though I don’t love them because I only love Miho but I’m not gonna try to stop them from continuing to romance me even though I rejected them.” crap, it’s really starting to get annoying. I like the non romance dynamics of the story, but the MC refusing to be more decisive about whether or not he’s gonna go for the harem route is very frustrating. If you don’t love them, stop baiting them and shut them down fully. If you do love them, stop rejecting them and accept the harem. It shouldn’t take over half the story to get a proper resolution to this…
4/5 c59 Ddraig3652
Came back to check this out after 3 years. Can’t say it aged well. You may remember our dm messages from 2021 (doesn’t really matter if you don’t). I really like the dynamic between miho and mc until she cucked herself. Her reasons for practically shoving mc into a harem seems ridiculous to me unfortunately. Not every DxD story has to become a harem fic but apparently not many people agree with me on that and you don’t have to anyway. This is your story and you get to decide what to do with out. It’s frustrating but there’s nothing to do for me. I wanted to see more of Miho/Mc pure love story and only that. Alas, this is where we part our ways old friend. Sadly, i’m dropping this story. Hope you have a good time, Goodbye.
Came back to check this out after 3 years. Can’t say it aged well. You may remember our dm messages from 2021 (doesn’t really matter if you don’t). I really like the dynamic between miho and mc until she cucked herself. Her reasons for practically shoving mc into a harem seems ridiculous to me unfortunately. Not every DxD story has to become a harem fic but apparently not many people agree with me on that and you don’t have to anyway. This is your story and you get to decide what to do with out. It’s frustrating but there’s nothing to do for me. I wanted to see more of Miho/Mc pure love story and only that. Alas, this is where we part our ways old friend. Sadly, i’m dropping this story. Hope you have a good time, Goodbye.
3/24 c20 Guest
Oh, so we're going off of what society he was raised in, eh?
Well, this is a fanfiction, not real life.
So basically, this goes from dense as Issei to being a rom com MC. Tbh, this is worse. I'm out.
Oh, so we're going off of what society he was raised in, eh?
Well, this is a fanfiction, not real life.
So basically, this goes from dense as Issei to being a rom com MC. Tbh, this is worse. I'm out.
3/24 c7 
1kirosyamcha
every time i hear his name i cringe to myself and ask.. who would name their child that? or why would he choose it for a fake name :X
1kirosyamchaevery time i hear his name i cringe to myself and ask.. who would name their child that? or why would he choose it for a fake name :X
3/23 c15 Guest
Right?
Ah yes, you are 10000000% correct. What makes you think that she will fall for someone who saved her from her marriage? Completely pathetic. You don't deserve her at all. You serve zero purpose. You should unalive yourself now! And give someone else that piece of oxygen.
(sarcasm)
Right?
Ah yes, you are 10000000% correct. What makes you think that she will fall for someone who saved her from her marriage? Completely pathetic. You don't deserve her at all. You serve zero purpose. You should unalive yourself now! And give someone else that piece of oxygen.
(sarcasm)