for A New Beginning6/12 c3 
19magical fan18
Yes may need to keep an eye on your spelling or autocorrect as you’ve mistakenly written Angel as Angle.
Reminds me of the spelling mistakes from Hot Fuzz.
19magical fan18Yes may need to keep an eye on your spelling or autocorrect as you’ve mistakenly written Angel as Angle.
Reminds me of the spelling mistakes from Hot Fuzz.
5/22 c10 FlyAwayQ
Rias not wanting to “cheat” to get her future back from the engagement has to be some of the dumbest shit I’ve ever read on a DxD fanfic. Hollow victory? Wtf? This is her future and she’s worried about stupid shit like that? She’s a devil. Since when has playing fair ever been a thing for her race? Especially when she’ll be used as a broodmare if she loses the rating game. Winning is winning. This is pure Mickey Mouse.
Rias not wanting to “cheat” to get her future back from the engagement has to be some of the dumbest shit I’ve ever read on a DxD fanfic. Hollow victory? Wtf? This is her future and she’s worried about stupid shit like that? She’s a devil. Since when has playing fair ever been a thing for her race? Especially when she’ll be used as a broodmare if she loses the rating game. Winning is winning. This is pure Mickey Mouse.
5/4 c65 noahthekraken1
Holy plot armor. Even og issei could beat cao cao. Now he beat fenrir but not cao cao? garbage powerscaling.
Holy plot armor. Even og issei could beat cao cao. Now he beat fenrir but not cao cao? garbage powerscaling.
3/24 c2 1Vormiam
The sheer amount of lunatics in this comment section who are complaining about MC crying is ridiculous. How sociopathic do you have to be to be THAT turned off by 100% justified human emotions? The dude just got kidnapped away from his home and family with no explanation and dropped into a foreign (not to mention supernaturally infested) country, of course he's going to cry about it. And on top of all that, he LITERALLY FUCKING DIED. All these "macho" edgelords over here acting like they wouldn't be crying too. Spoiler, you would be. If you guys want to read about an emotionless robot MC than you should ask ChatGPT to make something for you, not cry because someone else tries to give their character a realistic reaction to their fucked up situation.
1VormiamThe sheer amount of lunatics in this comment section who are complaining about MC crying is ridiculous. How sociopathic do you have to be to be THAT turned off by 100% justified human emotions? The dude just got kidnapped away from his home and family with no explanation and dropped into a foreign (not to mention supernaturally infested) country, of course he's going to cry about it. And on top of all that, he LITERALLY FUCKING DIED. All these "macho" edgelords over here acting like they wouldn't be crying too. Spoiler, you would be. If you guys want to read about an emotionless robot MC than you should ask ChatGPT to make something for you, not cry because someone else tries to give their character a realistic reaction to their fucked up situation.
2/24 c10 Zn32
Absolutely no reason for him to tell everyone that he’s from another world. He could just say he has prophetic dreams every now and then, you could have even included that he was able to focus thought onto them after the brain-scrubbing he got in the familiar forest. Personally, I think revealing the MC was reincarnated almost never makes sense, since there are usually a lot of ways to explain it. I might come back to this story later, but for now I have to take a break to reconcile what I think is a horrible decision by your MC, sorry. It was actually a pretty good story up until this point, but for now, its kind of ruined for me.
Absolutely no reason for him to tell everyone that he’s from another world. He could just say he has prophetic dreams every now and then, you could have even included that he was able to focus thought onto them after the brain-scrubbing he got in the familiar forest. Personally, I think revealing the MC was reincarnated almost never makes sense, since there are usually a lot of ways to explain it. I might come back to this story later, but for now I have to take a break to reconcile what I think is a horrible decision by your MC, sorry. It was actually a pretty good story up until this point, but for now, its kind of ruined for me.
12/24/2024 c9 sanyammalhotra190
Dont mind me but that one is idiotic. He coyld have simoly refused her or stalled her for grafiya to come. I mean the rating games idea is going to be there next day anyway.
Dont mind me but that one is idiotic. He coyld have simoly refused her or stalled her for grafiya to come. I mean the rating games idea is going to be there next day anyway.
12/16/2024 c30 niftyninja93
rias needs to back off daisuke already told her straight up he's not interested in her at all even said that to sirzechs also the way he's screwing around with akeno and her feelings makes me disgusted like dude grow a backbone instead of fucking around with those two it's pissing me the fuck off honestly i like this fanfiction alot but seriously can the author just rewrite this story kinda annyoing having akeno and rias getting his space
rias needs to back off daisuke already told her straight up he's not interested in her at all even said that to sirzechs also the way he's screwing around with akeno and her feelings makes me disgusted like dude grow a backbone instead of fucking around with those two it's pissing me the fuck off honestly i like this fanfiction alot but seriously can the author just rewrite this story kinda annyoing having akeno and rias getting his space
12/14/2024 c5 niftyninja93
"being called gay by a incredibly hot girl hurt my inner pride inside as a man" made me laugh out loud a for second the delivery was hilarious lmao
"being called gay by a incredibly hot girl hurt my inner pride inside as a man" made me laugh out loud a for second the delivery was hilarious lmao
11/15/2024 c65 Alucard05
Really well done chapter, unfortunately i will probably drop this fic soon, since outside of the interactions with the various characters, in terms of romance this is turning into another harem fic ( in squidwards wise words: how original ).
Outside of that keep writing, i really enjoyed the character growth of both your MC and those around him, and if you do write another fic, try doing like the "white dragon of justice", in which you explore various parts of the world from the start. Best of luck.
Really well done chapter, unfortunately i will probably drop this fic soon, since outside of the interactions with the various characters, in terms of romance this is turning into another harem fic ( in squidwards wise words: how original ).
Outside of that keep writing, i really enjoyed the character growth of both your MC and those around him, and if you do write another fic, try doing like the "white dragon of justice", in which you explore various parts of the world from the start. Best of luck.
10/30/2024 c1 Guest
Story has been out since 2019, has 60 chapters, and still hasn’t fixed a typo in the first sentence? I’ll pass.
Story has been out since 2019, has 60 chapters, and still hasn’t fixed a typo in the first sentence? I’ll pass.