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9/21/2019 c2 Guest
I hate this stories with the mc bitching about getting back home. I mean really it's the most dried out shitty excuse for plot.
9/18/2019 c1 PasiveNox
Its nice
9/17/2019 c20 Byayan
I LOVE this story!
9/17/2019 c20 Byayan
Me ENCANTA esta historia!
9/17/2019 c20 Mugen-Muse
Sometimes I wonder if those two got sent in by the Church to start the very war they were supposed to prevent.
9/17/2019 c20 xhope14x
Man I hope you put Xenovia in her place soon it suck every story has her being a bitch right off the bat.
9/17/2019 c20 1LatinStoryteller
It's kinda dope seeing the OC having an effect on the story. Looking forward to how it will keep going.
9/17/2019 c20 Guest-Questioner
Response, \_(ツ)_/

Now for the chapter review.

Overall, fairly well and, No grammar error's so, very clean.

The zealotry of Xenovia Quarta strikes again, i never liked that bit of her ai-yah...ahem...

I wonder, now. Hah hah...see you again at some point!
9/16/2019 c2 NazgulBelserion
Omg ewwww now he's crying for home and family yep fkin shoot me worst type of mcs are those that want to go back how lame welp hope others enjoy this angsty wannabe hero mc from what I can see not my cup of tea
9/16/2019 c1 NazgulBelserion
Lol read first chap said nope mc not keeping calm first mistake second mistake trying to save someone you don't even know who is he emiya shirou how gross let him die who cares about others
9/16/2019 c20 7ThePowerfullKira
can you have daisuke use the fusion dance eventually in the story. you already using the kaioken so why not?
9/16/2019 c20 3OechsnerC
Awesome update.
9/16/2019 c20 Zero1734
Hmmm... I wonder if Raynare will be part of ise's harem :0
9/16/2019 c20 Wandering Clown
I really enjoyed the chapter...awesome
9/16/2019 c20 1HalflingRunner
Loooool canon Chan just jumped out the window
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