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4/2/2019 c1 Apple89123
It would have been funny had he instead of the fallen said that last line.
3/7/2019 c6 3OechsnerC
Awesome update
3/7/2019 c6 Gerden360
Great chapter, your character has a lot of room to grow which is always good. As for the harem I'll leave it mostly to you and the others but I do think you should have some diversity in where they come from to keep things interesting.
2/19/2019 c5 OechsnerC
Awesome update
2/13/2019 c4 OechsnerC
Awesome update
2/10/2019 c3 1Fairyfiction21
For daisuke’s harem add: Akeno kuroka xenovia serafall rossweisse yasaka seekvaria and make ultear from fairy tail azazels daughter and add her too. No loli’s
2/10/2019 c4 Loser Stuck In Memory Lane
How big is a small harem? I’m just going to assume it’s 3-4. May I suggest Koneko, Ravel, Akeno and Serafall. Or fem Gasper.
2/5/2019 c3 Lazymanjones96
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
2/3/2019 c3 5a guy1013
Just keep updating
1/29/2019 c2 Guest-Questioner
(If this manages to also, get through)
In response to reply,

Ahem, well, I suppose i will accept it.

I AM kind of the same, at being a little lazy myself for some things'.

Ahem, carry on...
1/28/2019 c1 Guest-Questioner
(if this gets through)

My greatest apologies for the double post!

i'm commenting from my laptop and it almost ALWAYS,

has me believing my review's are NOT posted(i'm STILL sorry, sir/ma'am)
1/27/2019 c1 Guest-Questioner
You know what is/will-be, even more strange,
Its the fact that this O.C follows the same path as ninety-nine percent, of all High-school DxD O.C's!

Ending up In Rias Gremory' peerage only to have her, Akeno, Koneko(Shirone)

and many of Issei hyoudo harem(excluding Irina Shidou) as their own harem.

Considering this is just a, test chapter, I would advise against being one of the ninety-nine percent.

Okay sure, "save" Issei but again, Having the protagonist in Rias' peerage is considered,
same-old-same-old, Do something that is different from that.

Here some info,

The 99% are those who put either an, Original character, or a self-insert,

into the "Issei Harem" as it is called, again, Joining Rias Gremory' peerage
just to have her, Akeno, Koneko and Xenovia as their harem girl's,
is considered, same-old-same-old, it may even include but is not limited too
Sona Sitri and her Queen.

Among the one-percent, is infact, Sona Sitri' peerage, replacing Genshirou Saji, although,
they also eventually aim for the "Hyoudo harem" one way or another, so there IS that.

Along with, Seekvaira Agares(the glasses wearing female in the, Young Devil Gathering, episode)

There are even some story's that have the protagonist, O.C and/or S.I as part of the church
faction(working with Irina Shidou)
You saying any similarities, Well the most obvious is, as explained.

Above the, one-percentage.

Also, while you may be hating on the light novel and/or the manga,
their also, the most direct variations' of the, story of High-school DxD.

The Anime pretty much butchered the story(in general)
with season one & two, Season 3 was a means of trying to rectify that by leaving only a small,
handful of what occurred in the former season's, intact, while dismissing most everything else.

You can write it however you want but, if your going with the, protagonist
in Rias peerage along with the "Issei Harem" as his own, thing,
then i'd be giving it two and a half, out five, star's.

The first star, is because another new Highschool DxD O.C/S.I story has appeared.
The Second star, is because its alternate take on the same events', just with different perspective.

The half star, is because the Protagonist, whoever it is, becomes a member of Rias peerage
and eventually has Her, Akeno, Koneko and Xenovia, as their harem girls'.

Astonishingly enough, Asia is almost always, left for Issei(i'm guessing because of the, Nun thing)

You want three star's out of me, then add something more, for the half-star to become a full one, or,
make use of the, one-percentage, Anything NOT involving the protagonist joining rias peerage.
1/26/2019 c1 Guest-Questioner
You know what is/will-be, even more strange,
Its the fact that this O.C follows the same path as ninety-nine percent, of all High-school DxD O.C's!

Ending up In Rias Gremory' peerage only to have her, Akeno, Koneko(Shirone)

and many of Issei hyoudo harem(excluding Irina Shidou) as their own harem.

Considering this is just a, test chapter, I would advise against being one of the ninety-nine percent.

Okay sure, "save" Issei but again, Having the protagonist in Rias' peerage is considered,
same-old-same-old, Do something that is different from that.

Here some info,

The 99% are those who put either an, Original character, or a self-insert,

into the "Issei Harem" as it is called, again, Joining Rias Gremory' peerage
just to have her, Akeno, Koneko and Xenovia as their harem girl's,
is considered, same-old-same-old, it may even include but is not limited too
Sona Sitri and her Queen.

Among the one-percent, is infact, Sona Sitri' peerage, replacing Genshirou Saji, although,
they also eventually aim for the "Hyoudo harem" one way or another, so there IS that.

Along with, Seekvaira Agares(the glasses wearing female in the, Young Devil Gathering, episode)

There are even some story's that have the protagonist, O.C and/or S.I as part of the church
faction(working with Irina Shidou)
You saying any similarities, Well the most obvious is, as explained.

Above the, one-percentage.

Also, while you may be hating on the light novel and/or the manga,
their also, the most direct variations' of the, story of High-school DxD.

The Anime pretty much butchered the story(in general)
with season one & two, Season 3 was a means of trying to rectify that by leaving only a small,
handful of what occurred in the former season's, intact, while dismissing most everything else.

You can write it however you want but, if your going with the, protagonist
in Rias peerage along with the "Issei Harem" as his own, thing,
then i'd be giving it two and a half, out five, star's.

The first star, is because another new Highschool DxD O.C/S.I story has appeared.
The Second star, is because its alternate take on the same events', just with different perspective.

The half star, is because the Protagonist, whoever it is, becomes a member of Rias peerage
and eventually has Her, Akeno, Koneko and Xenovia, as their harem girls'.

Astonishingly enough, Asia is almost always, left for Issei(i'm guessing because of the, Nun thing)

You want three star's out of me, then add something more, for the half-star to become a full one, or,
make use of the, one-percentage, Anything NOT involving the protagonist joining rias peerage.
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