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3/28/2020 c22 kakaroto1997
Good Chapter
3/13/2020 c21 8Power of Magic
Good chapter, and I look forward to the next one
3/7/2020 c20 JapanHeroFics
I couldn't thank you enough for handling this episode/chapter "Illusion of Control" the way you did (i.e Naruto's opinion of the outsiders) because it covers one of my only two VERY major issues/dislikes with Season 3. The fact that you bring up a part of one of them in the A/N about how ppl feel towards this partical thing only reinforces this issue i had that gets revealed later on. I'll get into on it once I finally PM you so i don't spoil anything for anyone who hasnt seen 2nd half.

P.S. Sorry its been taking so long for me to P.M you as I've for the longest time wanted to with you being one of my all time favorite Naruto fanfic writers and share my thoughts/compliemnts and questions
3/6/2020 c19 JapanHeroFics
For Ch.19 "Leverage" was extremely cool really showing us how the planet is handling the metahuman uprising with russia making thier own. Great that we finally got the Suicide Squad debut in YJ which you already did funny enough and loved that you had Naruto referenced it too so it didn't distrub your stories canon. Loved how you continously switch Artemis and Stephanie for different parts of Artemis's scenes throughout Outsiders like Black Manta's beef or glancing at Naruto washing dishes. Good job
3/6/2020 c18 JapanHeroFics
Sorry I haven't been review lately but I'm back now and great job Lonewolf-01 on these so far. My review for ch.18. "Influence" was one of my favorite chapters seeing how it dealt with the " Justice League Space" sections and that was one of the best things for me in S3 having multiple teams, perspectives & missions of the heroes. Finally getting Thanagar, the Orphanage and Barda, Lena Luthor, Lashina and etc debut in Young Justice was awesome. Having Supes, Wondy and Hawkgirl vs Furies was great. Guy song along with Diana and Hawkman reaction was gold. I know how ppl feel towards social media being in tv stuff nowadays and occasionally I'm the same way depending on how things are handled but honestly this episode and season overall has been really great on its use seeing the media react to the Justice League like having Gordan shutdown the Batsignal is quite orignal content. Again love your use of Megaera being used for Donna scenes in S3
2/28/2020 c20 Shadow
Loved it!
2/19/2020 c19 Shadow
Great chapter!
2/19/2020 c19 Shadow
Great chapter!
2/19/2020 c19 Z-Breezy
Naruto isn't doing anything, he's just there.
2/19/2020 c19 gwb620
Excellent chapter!
2/18/2020 c19 Power of Magic
Looking forward to what you have planned next
1/31/2020 c18 Shadow
Loved it!
1/31/2020 c18 kakaroto1997
good chapter, you will not put scene Zatanna x Naruto
1/28/2020 c1 11MindForged
Never mind.
1/28/2020 c1 MindForged
...why would Naruto have a gun?
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