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11/28/2019 c1 K
Please continue this looks interesting
7/14/2019 c1 K
Please update soon this is very promising.
1/31/2019 c1 Loser Stuck In Memory Lane
Dude... a vast majority of this just didn’t make sense. It also felt like this just came out of nowhere. The way you said things was also just weird to me and try as I might to ignore the many mistakes... the whole thing was just terribly awkward and honestly fairly annoying to read. You said things that just took me out of the narrative really quickly in the beginning. What with you trying your hand at breaking the fourth wall.

I was really trying to give this story a go because Guts is an awesome character but I honestly don’t want to subject myself to this mess.

Please read this yourself. Then put it on audio and listen to this. It’s god awful. If your serious about this story you need to rewrite it so it’s not just one huge mess.
1/31/2019 c1 Scriptura
Like it. I dont know a lot about quuen's blade, but this story has potential. We need more good berserk fanfic on this site, so i will eagerly follow this story
1/28/2019 c1 Wia5529
good start
1/27/2019 c1 jjcoop95
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1/26/2019 c1 1grudgematch
Interested

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