for Sins of the Stars3/17 c7 Camille
OK she provoked him so hard
OK she provoked him so hard
2/4 c17 NeverNeverLady
I foresee one heck of a scrap breaking out between Mercy's suitors before long but I cannot foresee who the winner will be and if Mercy will even want him!
I foresee one heck of a scrap breaking out between Mercy's suitors before long but I cannot foresee who the winner will be and if Mercy will even want him!
7/26/2024 c16 keowarin292543
omg I love your story so much. It was really fun and engaging and I can't wait for the next chapter.
omg I love your story so much. It was really fun and engaging and I can't wait for the next chapter.
3/8/2024 c16 
14EvonySiren
EVAAAIL! You left us on a cliffhanger! :D
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I demand thee, mooore! :D
XD jk, take your time, im really enjoying this so far!
14EvonySirenEVAAAIL! You left us on a cliffhanger! :D
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I demand thee, mooore! :D
XD jk, take your time, im really enjoying this so far!
3/7/2024 c16 2NeverNeverLady
Finally! Took Ke'Nai long enough, didn't it, typical bloke. I wonder what Marc'te will have to say, can't imagine he's going to be too happy, he's already very keen to make her his.
Just a little bit of criticism and this isn't just you, many authors both here and on other platforms seem to make these same mistakes and I cannot understand why - 'scrape' is misspelled as 'scrap' and 'choke' is misspelled as 'chock'.
2NeverNeverLadyFinally! Took Ke'Nai long enough, didn't it, typical bloke. I wonder what Marc'te will have to say, can't imagine he's going to be too happy, he's already very keen to make her his.
Just a little bit of criticism and this isn't just you, many authors both here and on other platforms seem to make these same mistakes and I cannot understand why - 'scrape' is misspelled as 'scrap' and 'choke' is misspelled as 'chock'.
3/5/2024 c16 Guest
This chapter was perfect! Please update soon. I love this story
This chapter was perfect! Please update soon. I love this story
1/15/2024 c15 NeverNeverLady
Still loving this. It's different and lets us see another side of our favourite Aliens.
Still loving this. It's different and lets us see another side of our favourite Aliens.
1/14/2024 c15 Guest
Please update soon. I love this story. There will be love making scenes?
Please update soon. I love this story. There will be love making scenes?
4/12/2023 c14 Guest
I really loved this story and although it's unlikely to be added to given when it was last updated I really enjoyed my time reading it- it was completed original and everything about it was entertaining. Wish you all the best author 3
I really loved this story and although it's unlikely to be added to given when it was last updated I really enjoyed my time reading it- it was completed original and everything about it was entertaining. Wish you all the best author 3