
2/3 c43 CrunchyText
This series is the reason I haven’t been able to sleep properly for the last week. It is a shame that, from what I see, the author is burnt out from writing, especially so close to the end. The fic is great, glad to see jaune not being an emotional wreck or a drag like in canon.
I believe that maybe some time investment into the hybrid culture, by jaune’s part, would have been nice; him attempting everything he can to disimulate being a hybrid effectively and then that knowledge being to his advantage once he was in Vale. Also maybe some time on Ozpin’s perspective or Ironwood’s, they have been so passive (ozpin especially) that they pretty much seem useless.
The one thing that did make me angry was how Qrow and Raven treated Taiyang, as well as Jaune. Jaune remembered Ruby liking cookies when she sleeptalked, but not about her father after befriending Qrow and Winter? Not even a mention? But Qrow and Raven take the cake, Yang is Tai’s daughter, not Raven’s and yet the one who has the final say on wether Tai knows anything is her. Just my opinion ofc, but this makes it seem like Qrow is a terrible friend, and Raven lacks any respect for him.
Still, S tier story, amd finishing it is the reason I made an account now that the site is temorarily down. God I want moar.
This series is the reason I haven’t been able to sleep properly for the last week. It is a shame that, from what I see, the author is burnt out from writing, especially so close to the end. The fic is great, glad to see jaune not being an emotional wreck or a drag like in canon.
I believe that maybe some time investment into the hybrid culture, by jaune’s part, would have been nice; him attempting everything he can to disimulate being a hybrid effectively and then that knowledge being to his advantage once he was in Vale. Also maybe some time on Ozpin’s perspective or Ironwood’s, they have been so passive (ozpin especially) that they pretty much seem useless.
The one thing that did make me angry was how Qrow and Raven treated Taiyang, as well as Jaune. Jaune remembered Ruby liking cookies when she sleeptalked, but not about her father after befriending Qrow and Winter? Not even a mention? But Qrow and Raven take the cake, Yang is Tai’s daughter, not Raven’s and yet the one who has the final say on wether Tai knows anything is her. Just my opinion ofc, but this makes it seem like Qrow is a terrible friend, and Raven lacks any respect for him.
Still, S tier story, amd finishing it is the reason I made an account now that the site is temorarily down. God I want moar.
12/17/2024 c37 Guest
Great story binged it. It was so great in fact that you lost me with the Blake love ark cause everything before that was so awesome. It kind of felt repetitive and i was a bit warn out by having enjoyed everything before that so much. Dopamine receptors and all that. I was skeptical at the beginning but you captured the essence of every character probably better then the creators of RWBY did. I felt for them all. Loved the twist were Blake protected Jaune even though she was a psycho
Great story binged it. It was so great in fact that you lost me with the Blake love ark cause everything before that was so awesome. It kind of felt repetitive and i was a bit warn out by having enjoyed everything before that so much. Dopamine receptors and all that. I was skeptical at the beginning but you captured the essence of every character probably better then the creators of RWBY did. I felt for them all. Loved the twist were Blake protected Jaune even though she was a psycho
12/13/2024 c6 Guest
OMG Weiss was adorable this chapter lol
OMG Weiss was adorable this chapter lol
10/25/2024 c1 Knighted Arc
As i mightve said or will be saying in your stories, they are absolute masterpieces. I’ve truly as others have. Been enthralled by your works, this one creating a beatiful portrait of beauty, monstrocity, disdain and reconciliation. Works like these really bring out the imagination of those who seek a new branch on a tree far too old and withered.
As i mightve said or will be saying in your stories, they are absolute masterpieces. I’ve truly as others have. Been enthralled by your works, this one creating a beatiful portrait of beauty, monstrocity, disdain and reconciliation. Works like these really bring out the imagination of those who seek a new branch on a tree far too old and withered.
10/17/2024 c43 Soiken
translated by google:
you know, i had to re-read the story 3 times to understand some obvious facts, this story is an amalgam of romance, comedy, drama, horror (to a lesser extent), but above all... love. and here comes the joke, jaune the fool hopelessly in love with the hybrids is a cheesy boyfriend who will not reject any display of affection from his cute and abominable girlfriends, that includes a cute and huge metal heart necklace... glass proof... and that he would never take off for his cute girlfriend... it's so ridiculous and obvious that you can only laugh
translated by google:
you know, i had to re-read the story 3 times to understand some obvious facts, this story is an amalgam of romance, comedy, drama, horror (to a lesser extent), but above all... love. and here comes the joke, jaune the fool hopelessly in love with the hybrids is a cheesy boyfriend who will not reject any display of affection from his cute and abominable girlfriends, that includes a cute and huge metal heart necklace... glass proof... and that he would never take off for his cute girlfriend... it's so ridiculous and obvious that you can only laugh
10/17/2024 c14 Guest
Blake knowing was pretty obvious to be honest. I mean, if she didn't know, THAT would be surprising.
Blake knowing was pretty obvious to be honest. I mean, if she didn't know, THAT would be surprising.
9/26/2024 c1 naedinefebruary2.0
Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, My Abominable Monster Classmates Can't Be This Cute, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord with your story name.
Here is my discord : naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, My Abominable Monster Classmates Can't Be This Cute, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord with your story name.
Here is my discord : naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
8/29/2024 c43
3Zoommerfish
Ah hell what a cliffhanger of a return chapter. I was rereading this fic after seeing you update and I am both enormously satisfied, yet left craving more. How the hell are they getting out of this mess, what with Ruby going berserk and revealing her hybrid nature in such a massive crowd.
With all the references you make in your fiction are you gonna give these Golden eyes a Mangekyou Sharingan reference? After all it is similarly acquired through deep love turning into hate by loss.
So glad this fic is still alive, I'm so pumped for what comes next.

Ah hell what a cliffhanger of a return chapter. I was rereading this fic after seeing you update and I am both enormously satisfied, yet left craving more. How the hell are they getting out of this mess, what with Ruby going berserk and revealing her hybrid nature in such a massive crowd.
With all the references you make in your fiction are you gonna give these Golden eyes a Mangekyou Sharingan reference? After all it is similarly acquired through deep love turning into hate by loss.
So glad this fic is still alive, I'm so pumped for what comes next.
8/27/2024 c15 Jefehorus Rincon
There is in my mind a thought, as ephemeral as impertinent, that clings to the most hidden corners of my being, like a tenacious specter in the penumbra of reason. I feel, with an uncertain but indisputable clarity, the presence of a deja-vu, a kind of reminiscence that takes me, almost as if in a dream, to the pages of that story, “Professor Arc”, born of the genius of Koeur Alaran.
It is as if the very essence of that story were seeping into the folds of this new narrative, melting into a mysterious and familiar embrace that I cannot quite decipher. This parallelism disturbs me, unsettles my spirit and awakens in me an indefinable fear, at the same time as a strange and lively emotion.
I have yet to unravel several chapters of this story that intrigues me so much, but I assure you, my dear interlocutor, that the plot is becoming more and more exciting, and my heart beats with the anticipation of what is to come.
There is in my mind a thought, as ephemeral as impertinent, that clings to the most hidden corners of my being, like a tenacious specter in the penumbra of reason. I feel, with an uncertain but indisputable clarity, the presence of a deja-vu, a kind of reminiscence that takes me, almost as if in a dream, to the pages of that story, “Professor Arc”, born of the genius of Koeur Alaran.
It is as if the very essence of that story were seeping into the folds of this new narrative, melting into a mysterious and familiar embrace that I cannot quite decipher. This parallelism disturbs me, unsettles my spirit and awakens in me an indefinable fear, at the same time as a strange and lively emotion.
I have yet to unravel several chapters of this story that intrigues me so much, but I assure you, my dear interlocutor, that the plot is becoming more and more exciting, and my heart beats with the anticipation of what is to come.
8/26/2024 c43 Bartfratze
What a cliffhanger ending. I can't tell if Jaune got tricked by Emerald to lose in a horrendous way or if Ruby is instead trapped in an illusion.
Anyway, the fallout is going to be something to behold.
What a cliffhanger ending. I can't tell if Jaune got tricked by Emerald to lose in a horrendous way or if Ruby is instead trapped in an illusion.
Anyway, the fallout is going to be something to behold.
8/16/2024 c43 NewbornCretin
Well I binged it and it is a highly enjoyable story the latest chapter feels like such a cop out on the cliffhanger I feel that it invalidates a lot of the themes that were being built up. I will hold my horses however until the next chapter since I could be pleasantly surprised if Ruby's Golden eyes end up being a little more conceptual in their "destruction" maybe she destroys hurt or injury instead and Salem's well laid plan is foiled.
Wait and see I guess , still excellent story like holy shit 10/10
Well I binged it and it is a highly enjoyable story the latest chapter feels like such a cop out on the cliffhanger I feel that it invalidates a lot of the themes that were being built up. I will hold my horses however until the next chapter since I could be pleasantly surprised if Ruby's Golden eyes end up being a little more conceptual in their "destruction" maybe she destroys hurt or injury instead and Salem's well laid plan is foiled.
Wait and see I guess , still excellent story like holy shit 10/10
8/11/2024 c43
10CalvinZilla
Huh, I didn't know that bit about Golden Eyed Warriors, and I've read through Dishwasher's profile on DeviantArt. Is there a link?

Huh, I didn't know that bit about Golden Eyed Warriors, and I've read through Dishwasher's profile on DeviantArt. Is there a link?
8/11/2024 c43
2The.Brotherhood.0f.Steel
Binged this entire story really enjoyed it so far can't wait for more.

Binged this entire story really enjoyed it so far can't wait for more.