for The Cockroach- Danny and the Cliff10/29/2020 c7 
6westerns never die
Okay, let me say I hate roaches and would be fully behind Steve and the team in ridding the car of George.
Then I read the story and now I’m going to go and read the rest of George’s tale.
A sarcastic roach, who’d have thought? But I loved his little “mini part.”
6westerns never dieOkay, let me say I hate roaches and would be fully behind Steve and the team in ridding the car of George.
Then I read the story and now I’m going to go and read the rest of George’s tale.
A sarcastic roach, who’d have thought? But I loved his little “mini part.”
6/25/2019 c7 Guest
Nice! Great that George made a final appearance :) I have to this this was one brilliant story! Please keep writing :) :) :)
Nice! Great that George made a final appearance :) I have to this this was one brilliant story! Please keep writing :) :) :)
6/23/2019 c7 Long Live BRUCAS
Aw Poor George so sad. But nice of Steve to have a box for it and let Danny burry it in his back yard.
lol
Danny knew about the plot to kill George. But in a way he got his revenge on Steve at least by not telling him the Camaro was fixed.
Aw Poor George so sad. But nice of Steve to have a box for it and let Danny burry it in his back yard.
lol
Danny knew about the plot to kill George. But in a way he got his revenge on Steve at least by not telling him the Camaro was fixed.
6/22/2019 c7 2Elise Deschat
Loved the story, glad George finally got the respect he was due.
On a side note, the denouement reminded me of my childhood... when staying at my Grandmother's house in the country, my cousin who is a few months older than my brother and I would have bug burials... my cousin was the pastor, my brother the undertaker and I always got to be the mourner...I can just see burial at the beach...LOL
2Elise DeschatLoved the story, glad George finally got the respect he was due.
On a side note, the denouement reminded me of my childhood... when staying at my Grandmother's house in the country, my cousin who is a few months older than my brother and I would have bug burials... my cousin was the pastor, my brother the undertaker and I always got to be the mourner...I can just see burial at the beach...LOL
6/18/2019 c6 Guest
Wow, extraordinary writing! I loved the last chapter and I could really feel with Danny and Steve. Steve is a good friend, how he kept his calm, distracted Danny and comforted him during the rescue - you discribed that along Danny’s feelings and thoughts brilliantly without making it lengthy. I felt like I was with them in the car! And now I feel a little stressed and worried myself ;) Sounds like the last bit of the rescue might get stressful again... hope for a little bit more comforting from Steve to settle my stressed mind ;) thank you so much for writing!
Wow, extraordinary writing! I loved the last chapter and I could really feel with Danny and Steve. Steve is a good friend, how he kept his calm, distracted Danny and comforted him during the rescue - you discribed that along Danny’s feelings and thoughts brilliantly without making it lengthy. I felt like I was with them in the car! And now I feel a little stressed and worried myself ;) Sounds like the last bit of the rescue might get stressful again... hope for a little bit more comforting from Steve to settle my stressed mind ;) thank you so much for writing!
6/18/2019 c6 Sabine68
Finally the rescue, what a wonderful story. Hope you continue to write despite the chaotic situation you seem to be in. Love your writing style.
Finally the rescue, what a wonderful story. Hope you continue to write despite the chaotic situation you seem to be in. Love your writing style.
6/18/2019 c6 88Irene Claire
OMG that was SOME rescue scene - high stakes and stress from start to finish. Loved every minute of it!
88Irene ClaireOMG that was SOME rescue scene - high stakes and stress from start to finish. Loved every minute of it!
6/18/2019 c6 2Elise Deschat
Internal bleeding, never said what the BP was...
But where's George? Has our heroic bug gone the way of Jamel or does he still reside in the car?
2Elise DeschatInternal bleeding, never said what the BP was...
But where's George? Has our heroic bug gone the way of Jamel or does he still reside in the car?
6/18/2019 c6 Long Live BRUCAS
Good Danny is safe. And Jamel can't hurt or get to Danny. Wow that must of been scary and Danny finally seeing it...
Good Danny is safe. And Jamel can't hurt or get to Danny. Wow that must of been scary and Danny finally seeing it...
5/22/2019 c5 88Irene Claire
I don’t know how I missed this story. It’s great. In fact I just spent time meeting George in the first introduction. I love this and George. Sounds like he may hopefully save the day!
88Irene ClaireI don’t know how I missed this story. It’s great. In fact I just spent time meeting George in the first introduction. I love this and George. Sounds like he may hopefully save the day!
5/21/2019 c5 grannyv3
I'm glad you are back. I'm a patient person , and I know that life sometimes interferes with our plans. Take whatever time you need, we certainly can wait for more! I'd rather have irregular chapters than none at all!
I'm glad you are back. I'm a patient person , and I know that life sometimes interferes with our plans. Take whatever time you need, we certainly can wait for more! I'd rather have irregular chapters than none at all!
5/21/2019 c5 2Elise Deschat
did George escape Jamal or will he go down with the car?
Thanks for the chapter and recap...
2Elise Deschatdid George escape Jamal or will he go down with the car?
Thanks for the chapter and recap...
4/1/2019 c4 Lou
What a clever title and great storyline. Update soon!
What a clever title and great storyline. Update soon!
3/31/2019 c4 Guest
Oh no- what a situation and how well you describe this. I had the feeling I am in the car with them. Hopefully they will get out soon.
Oh no- what a situation and how well you describe this. I had the feeling I am in the car with them. Hopefully they will get out soon.