for Deer Diary1/25/2020 c5 madihaa.16
I LOVE HOW YOU'VE WRITTEN SIRIUS AND LILY'S FRIENDSHIP! I love this story so so so much and I can't wait for the next update :)
I LOVE HOW YOU'VE WRITTEN SIRIUS AND LILY'S FRIENDSHIP! I love this story so so so much and I can't wait for the next update :)
1/25/2020 c5 Guest
THEIR FRIENDSHIP IS AMAZING. U HAVE TO WRITE MORE ABOUT IT. And the puns were spot on!
THEIR FRIENDSHIP IS AMAZING. U HAVE TO WRITE MORE ABOUT IT. And the puns were spot on!
10/28/2019 c4 madihaa.16
I have read my fair share of 'Marauders Era Fanfiction' but this is, hands down, of the best! I love this chapter and the KISS, my heart was gonna explode I swear Your style of writing is just *chef's kiss* AMAZING. Anyhoo, I cannot wait for the next update !
I have read my fair share of 'Marauders Era Fanfiction' but this is, hands down, of the best! I love this chapter and the KISS, my heart was gonna explode I swear Your style of writing is just *chef's kiss* AMAZING. Anyhoo, I cannot wait for the next update !
8/27/2019 c3 Guest
Ok sorry it took forever to review I’ve been out of the country and trying to figure out my life. But oh my word the wait was sooo worth it! First off- puns100! Also Lily is starting to fall for james! Plus she’s embracing herself! Yas girl!
Ok sorry it took forever to review I’ve been out of the country and trying to figure out my life. But oh my word the wait was sooo worth it! First off- puns100! Also Lily is starting to fall for james! Plus she’s embracing herself! Yas girl!
62/27/2019 c2 Guest
They're soo cute! I love their banter! Honestly, this is the best kind of relationship, where you grow to like someone after being friends but can still joke/mess around with them!
They're soo cute! I love their banter! Honestly, this is the best kind of relationship, where you grow to like someone after being friends but can still joke/mess around with them!
1/29/2019 c1 Guest
THE SEVEN THINGS I HATE ABOUT YOU!
Also soo cute! I already feel the love forming! BEAUTIFUL!
But if I was the one that was soo mad at James I wouldn’t be that quick to laugh at his jokes. Still lowkey mad at him.
Also as a reader I want to hear the thoughts of James. Like why does he keep annoying her? Does he like her or not? Ugh, boys!
Anyways, LOVE IT!
THE SEVEN THINGS I HATE ABOUT YOU!
Also soo cute! I already feel the love forming! BEAUTIFUL!
But if I was the one that was soo mad at James I wouldn’t be that quick to laugh at his jokes. Still lowkey mad at him.
Also as a reader I want to hear the thoughts of James. Like why does he keep annoying her? Does he like her or not? Ugh, boys!
Anyways, LOVE IT!
1/29/2019 c1 TrueHomiePiP
I really enjoyed this :'D I think you're capturing the indomitable spirit of James Potter very well so far :D He's largely insufferable as a youngster, but he's lovable to his core :D he genuinely seems to misunderstand why someone might think he's abrasive, or just too much in general xD great job! looking forward to seeing where you take it next \o/
I really enjoyed this :'D I think you're capturing the indomitable spirit of James Potter very well so far :D He's largely insufferable as a youngster, but he's lovable to his core :D he genuinely seems to misunderstand why someone might think he's abrasive, or just too much in general xD great job! looking forward to seeing where you take it next \o/
1/29/2019 c1 Guest
Oh I love this! Really adorable and refreshing that this story starts in their 1. year.
Can’t wait for an update!
Oh I love this! Really adorable and refreshing that this story starts in their 1. year.
Can’t wait for an update!